Comments For The Man Between Us
Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Mar 07, 2014 09:00 pm (Chapter 36 - Bleed For Me (Part One))
See you can't do this to us!!! I don't like cliff hangers. I need the other chapter!!!! I really don't think I can put this into words how much I am loving this story. I heart about stopped at the end where it seems like Marc is putting distance between Lance and Addy. I dont like them being seperated. Please please update soon. Pretty please with sugar on top
AceofSpades (Signed) on Mar 07, 2014 08:25 pm (Chapter 36 - Bleed For Me (Part One))
Loved seeing the scene with Lance's parents a second time. Like I said earlier, I feel like Addy's been pregnant for a year. haha.
Well, of course he's still going to want her, Marc.
You're doing a great job with showing his sadistic behavior in regards to how he toys with them with the gun and how it wasn't loaded.
I also like how you're showing his relationsihp with Mackenzie as well. I had a feeling he just wanted to get rid of the baby, but him wanting to amp it up to killing them is great, too.
