Comments For The Man Between Us
Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jan 27, 2014 07:55 pm (Chapter 24 - Honeymoon's Over)
That last part literally gave me chills. I can't wait for the next chapter. 



AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Jan 27, 2014 07:54 pm (Chapter 24 - Honeymoon's Over)
Can't have a moment of peace, can they? I loved how you added, "Can't Help Falling in Love With You" in this chapter. It's one of my favorite songs.



AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Jan 25, 2014 07:32 pm (Chapter 23 - Rendezvous)
Tsk, tsk. Going after a baby. Bad move. With a mother worried about having a second miscarriage...wrong person to target.

Great chapter.



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jan 25, 2014 06:54 pm (Chapter 23 - Rendezvous)
I hope it isn't Mel, but she seems to have a major secret. Please don't let Addie and Lance lose the baby. I don't think she or he could take it. Can't wait for the next chapter.



AceofSpades (Signed) on Jan 18, 2014 07:55 pm (Chapter 22 - Because You Loved Me)
heh. heh. They both have James in their name. Iwas hoping an actual wedding between the two of  them, but it was worth seeing Mel and Joey freak out and demand to know why they were there and dressed up.

I'm so glad you updated, but three chapters? (Not that I'm not happy, but tut, tut. Youve made me look bad. haha)

I'm soooo glad they're finally married!! :)

Author's Response:

LOL don't be too impressed, I had a good majority of 2 of those already written that I just had to edit and add in things.

I struggled with not having a real wedding for them but I thought under the insane circumstances I seem to have put them...this was enough stress. LOL

It's a good thing the man doesn't take the woman's last name, huh? :P 




AceofSpades (Signed) on Jan 18, 2014 07:52 pm (Chapter 21 - Marry You)
I thought for sure she was going to throw up again at the end. haha.



AceofSpades (Signed) on Jan 18, 2014 07:50 pm (Chapter 20 - Not Such A Bad Thing (Part Two))
FINALLY!!! *achem* great chapter. Loved the 20 questions. Off to read more



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jan 17, 2014 12:01 am (Chapter 19 - Not Such A Bad Thing (Part One))
Oh please update ASAP. I have to know how Lance reacts to the news. I keep checking the page to see if a new chapter has been posted. I hate waiting. I'm still leery of Mel. I dont know but something does not add up with her. I hope Chris doesn't get hurt. Please update soon. Love it. Thanks

Author's Response: Hopefully very soon! I'm a little stuck but I'm desperately trying to work through it, and once I do, it will be posted!



ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Jan 16, 2014 06:58 pm (Prologue - One Last Chance)
F-I-N-A-L-L-Y



ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Jan 15, 2014 08:07 pm (Prologue - One Last Chance)
Omg revenge is SWEET! that was awesome! Go Addy!! I love you for writing this lol

Author's Response: I think we're all learning that she's quiet, she's sweet, she's unassuming, but you don't piss Addy off lol



DiamondDoss (Anonymous) on Jan 15, 2014 06:40 pm (Chapter 17 - Fair Fight)
Mwahahahahaha!!!! That's funny as hell! I feel bad for Mel but Addy pulled a great one.  ...snickers...sea bass. 



AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Jan 15, 2014 08:46 am (Chapter 16 - Below The Belt)
This is easily something I could see a group of boys doing. But, poor Mel! Great chapter



ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Jan 14, 2014 10:56 pm (Prologue - One Last Chance)
You're GREAT at this torture Courtney stuff. I LOVE THEM. It's not fair.  Poor Mel...nobody should get stuff dumped on them. JUST WRONG!! ahahhhhhh Im so glad you are writing this! Hearts.



AceofSpades (Signed) on Jan 12, 2014 07:55 pm (Chapter 15 - That Girl Is Murder)
Hmmm, I think it'd be too convenient for Mel to be the one doing all of this, so I don't think it's her. As a twist, I think it's Mackenzie who turned over a new leaf and is making sure that Addy and Lance can have a good life together.

Kind of far fetched but....

Author's Response: Interesting suspicion!



AceofSpades (Signed) on Jan 12, 2014 07:53 pm (Chapter 14 - I Know Your Secret)
No, Lance! Don't talk to her like that. Addy needs to stop being so stubborn! =/





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