Ooh Candy Land! :) Playing with actual candy is alot more fun though.. :D
Miss those days of being in Pre K, which is why I'm a Kindy subsitute teacher..
Ok moving on, back to this:
I like how Jimmy explained to JC about him being a jerk, because right now, JC is being one..all of these lines:
“Hell no,” JC shook his head vehemently. “I’m not bringing an entourage across the country.”
“An entourage. Really,” Jimmy snorted. “Your kid and the nanny? You call that an entourage?”
“Whatever. I’m not starting all that. Besides, nobody knows about her yet and I like it like that,” JC turned away to listen to one of the tracks they’d just laid down.
“Um, you know that’s not going to last,” Jimmy turned the volume down on the board, ignoring JC’s protest. “I’m pretty sure word’s gonna get out. You can’t keep her locked up in that house forever like Rapunzel.”
“I know that. She’s at preschool as we speak,” JC moved Jimmy’s hand away from the control panel, but Jimmy disregarded it. “Dude, seriously, lemme fuckin listen to the track!”
“C, you’re acting like this doesn’t exist. It exists. You have a kid and you at least need to acknowledge that!” Jimmy snapped at him and JC frowned.
“Do you know why I was late today? Cause my fucking kid spilled coffee on me! So trust me, I acknowledge her!” JC’s temper flared and he stood to his feet. “I wish everyone would get off my damn back about it. She shows up on my doorstep a week ago and I’m automatically supposed to develop feelings towards her. But I can’t. I can’t.”
And now Emma Claire doesn't even want to talk to her own dad.. :(
Both were good chapters! I'll read more soon.. :) Thanks for the update
Author's Response: More coming soon right now. I'm glad you liked the update ;)