Comments For Sweet Child of Mine
theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 25, 2014 10:18 pm (Chapter 13)

“She’s cute,” Jimmy gestured towards Annie.

JC, assuming Jimmy meant Emma-Claire, responded with, “Thanks.”

Jimmy looked at him as if he were crazy. “I meant your nanny.”

“Oh,” JC rubbed the back of his neck with his hand and looked over at Annie and Emma-Claire. “Yeah. I guess.”

“Wow, you’re full of it,” Jimmy shook his head at JC. “You can’t tell me you haven’t thought she was pretty.”

JC shrugged. He didn’t want to give anything away, so he tried changing the subject. “Yeah, anyway, so we have the girls on Lance’s show and then –“

“You’re blushing,” Jimmy pointed and slapped JC’s shoulder. “Wow, you have thought about her in another way, haven’t you?”

I love how Jimmy just keeps on going with this, and JC keeps ignoring it..LOL

Ok, this was nice.. :) I liked the part where all three of them were at the park, the chemistry between them is working, and Emma Claire is seeing it.

These lines here towards the end: That fall today had just been a fluke, clumsy thing and JC was cute, she’d give him that. And when a strong, cute, older man looked at her with those beautiful, sharp eyes, what else was she supposed to do? Ignore that? She’d be blind to have ignored that. No. It was a fluke. It was done

*happy sigh* that typical JC stare, I mean COME ON.. forget Doug Annie and go with JC..

Woot! This is GOOD! *reads more*




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jan 22, 2014 07:54 pm (Chapter 13)
Yay! JC's not an ass anymore! *Fist Pumps* The more likeable JC becomes, the more I'm like, okay, now Doug can go away. I may be getting a little ahead of myself, but JC, Emma-Claire and Annie would make the perfect family! 

Author's Response: LOL! I know! I was so ready to make him sweet again ;)



Sarah (Signed) on Jan 22, 2014 03:22 pm (Chapter 13)
Aw I'm glad JC is finally getting his act together and I laughed at him getting stuck in the slide. Can't wait to see what happens between Annie and JC next.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Sarah!





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