Comments For Sweet Child of Mine
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jan 26, 2014 04:11 pm (Chapter 15)
My, oh my! I don't think I've ever been more jealous of fictional character in my life! And yes, this is the one that I've been waiting for. 

Author's Response: Haha!!! I laughed out loud when I read that!! There will be plenty more steam coming up in the next few chapters ;)



Sarah (Signed) on Jan 26, 2014 04:43 am (Chapter 15)
Holy cow! I need a cig after that. Love it. I also enjoyed JC plying Barbies, very funny.

Author's Response: HA!! Glad you liked it...check back for more tomorrow ;)



theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 25, 2014 11:07 pm (Chapter 15)

I am laughing so hard right now! The image of JC playing barbies is hilarious! LOL I can so see him doing that! :D

These lines here: JC nodded. “Sure. It’ll be fun. Daddy used to play Barbie’s with your Aunt Heather.” This was partially true. By playing Barbie’s with his younger sister it had usually meant that he would kidnap a Barbie doll on behalf of He-Man and GI Joe and Heather would usually find Barbie propped up in Greyskull Castle.

“But if we don’t go shopping today what will I wear to the movies with Ken?” he said, his voice sounding like a small child. *giggles*

Now on the fun part! FINALLY they KISSED and had some foreplay, see?? Annie?, don't be ashamed, this is JC we are talking about..I LOVE that it happened so naturally, no pressure! WOOT! All that grabbing and kissing and touching..AMAZING! Especially if its with JC freakin Chasez, yeah I went there..lolz

Ok let me stop, AWESOME job on these chapters, I managed to review all of them, so yay! :D



Author's Response: Thanks, Steph :) I'm glad you liked the way I portrayed their foreplay. I was trying to make it as natural as possible. Thanks for the review!



kb4jc (Signed) on Jan 24, 2014 05:55 pm (Chapter 15)
Omg. Please I want Moore 



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jan 24, 2014 02:04 pm (Chapter 15)
Hot, Hot, Hot. I loved this chapter. Now what's gonna happen when they wake up??? I can't wait for the next chapter. I just don't want JC to start taking advantage of Annie because of how much she cares for Emma. 

Author's Response: Working on the next chapter as I type this! 





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