Comments For Double Occupancy
theusagirl (Signed) on Mar 25, 2014 10:03 pm (Chapter 4)
Author's Response: I've been out of town! Thanks for the review :)
WOO! You GO Delaney! I would do that same thing to him, I would sit him down and NOT in a provocative way..lolz but speak the TRUTH. :D *applause* I'm proud of Delaney, and her good employee friends to back her up.
JC's gonna LOSE, he's gonna lose big time, I am grinning like a fool right now.. LOL
I think JC is like King Bowser in his freakin castle and the employees are the Koopa Kids, his servants and listening to every word he says...
This is really good! :D I'm enjoying this! Great job so far, looking forward for more..
Author's Response: I've been out of town! Thanks for the review :)
Megan (Anonymous) on Mar 17, 2014 05:51 pm (Chapter 4)
Well good for Delaney for standing up to JC! Hope he realizes that he isn't being as sneaky about his escapades as he thinks he is!!
Author's Response: Maybe he'll learn his lesson...eventually ;) Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: Maybe he'll learn his lesson...eventually ;) Thanks for reading!
MissM (Signed) on Mar 17, 2014 01:15 pm (Chapter 4)
I really like to see Delaney giving him the business!
Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing that part! LOL!!
Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing that part! LOL!!
AceofSpades (Signed) on Mar 16, 2014 06:46 pm (Chapter 4)
Thought I had reviewed this already. Anyway....You tell him, Delaney! I liked getting the little back story on JC. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Working on more :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Working on more :)
WannaSpaceRideJC (Signed) on Mar 16, 2014 06:23 pm (Chapter 4)
Love the sass Delaney gave to JC at the end. Good to see a little insight as to why JC became the dictator-asshole he seems to be.
Author's Response: More insight to follow that as well. Thanks for reading :)
Author's Response: More insight to follow that as well. Thanks for reading :)
Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Mar 16, 2014 02:13 pm (Chapter 4)
I really wanted to smack JC upside the head!!! God I love asshole JC, but I like sweet JC much better so I hope as the story goes along we see some of that. I am so intrigued by this story. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: It might take a while but if you stick w/it, you'll see a nice side of JC emerge ...eventually.
Author's Response: It might take a while but if you stick w/it, you'll see a nice side of JC emerge ...eventually.
