Comments For Double Occupancy
theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 24, 2016 09:08 pm (Chapter 11)

HA! :D

These lines here:   Yet, here they were at midnight rolling around on his bed, fucking each other for the umpteenth time that night.

Now, the flashbacks that JC kept having are recurring, glad that he told Delaney about them though, iits also a good thing that Delaney saw different side of JC she hadn't seen before..

Good update, looking forward for more... :) 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Stephy!!



DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jan 24, 2016 04:12 pm (Chapter 11)
I love this. I like the little plot twists you add in. Very nice job girl

Author's Response: Thanks Mel! I'm so glad you're liking it :)



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jan 23, 2016 04:15 pm (Chapter 11)
I really like the way this story is going. Interested to see what the staff at the hotel think when they see a different side to JC. Of course to see Delaney and JC's relationship continue to change, and let's see how JC may screw this up....maybe one of his previous fuck buddies comes back....can't wait for more! Love your stories! 

Author's Response: Thanks, Lyndsi! I'm so glad you're liking it! I'm having fun writing it, that's for sure ;)



theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 06, 2016 07:40 pm (Chapter 10)
All she could think about was JC. His body on top of hers, his hands in places she hadn’t been touched in what had felt like years, his tongue…she shivered. His tongue could do things that she was pretty sure had never been done to her before

AND THEY DID IT AGAIN! I so laughed at JC's joke: "What happens in the Caribbean stays in the Caribbean..."

Now for some reason, I feel like listening to "Animal" by JC of course..you may have heard it already, that song totally fits this chapter... ;)

Great update! :D 



Author's Response: OMG I LOVE that song! Actually, that's a good way to describe their relationship... ;)



DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jan 06, 2016 06:16 pm (Chapter 10)
So glad you updated this story. I can't believe (Okay so I can) JC and Delaney sleeping together. I want more!!

Author's Response: Your wish is my command ;)



theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 31, 2015 09:48 pm (Chapter 9)

MINDBLOWING SEX IS RIGHT! HA YES! WOOT! OMG FINALLY! Its been FOREVER since I've read this story!

Reading this chapter on NYE while being a bit tipsy is just wonderful, now all I need is JC...LOL

How you been?! :D

Ok, the little flashback was sad... :(  Karen is my mother. You are just some mixed up slut who should have never been allowed to have children in the first place. You’d better be glad I was able to graduate high school and not be all fucked up in the head because of how drugged up you were.”

Poor JC, I agree his mom comes to his graduation after all these years?? Pssh, the nerve...

Hmm..not sure about the one-night stand that JC and Delaney had, I'm sure they'll be more, more rounds..yes.. ahem..

Awesome chapter! Hope you have a Happy and safe New Year... :D Thanks for the update!  



Author's Response: Stephy! Thanks so much :) Happy New Year to you as well! More will be otu soon!



AceofSpades (Signed) on Dec 28, 2015 10:45 am (Chapter 9)
Hell, no it won't be the last time you end up in JC's bed. Haha. I'm so glad you updated. Certainly worth the wait. Great chapter. Can't wait to see what will come next.

Author's Response: THanks so much!! New chapter coming soon :)



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Dec 27, 2015 09:01 pm (Chapter 9)
This story is coming along great. I love how we're slowly getting more and more character development coupled with backstory. :) well done! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!! New chapter will be out soon!



MissM (Signed) on Dec 27, 2015 02:14 pm (Chapter 9)
Glad to see this story back in action! Great chapter! 

Author's Response: Thank you, ma'am! More coming soon :)



Kit Kat Tysen (Signed) on Dec 15, 2015 01:27 am (Chapter 8)
JUST discovered this site, and SO glad to have come across this story. So engaging and well-written. I love the character development, especially for JC. Who doesn't love a sexy punk with secret baggage?! Looking forward to see this all unfolds!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this!!! I just updated so please let me know what you think :) Happy reading!



DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jul 10, 2015 10:53 pm (Chapter 8)
Holy fashizzle..I LOVE THIS. Why didn't I read earlier? I want more. I love Joey and Chris and the roles you've put them in. I can so see Joey being a bartender. That man can serve me a cold Corona with lime anyday. :) Love this.

Author's Response: More coming verrry soon!



creativechaos (Signed) on May 31, 2015 05:03 pm (Chapter 8)
Oh my god, what the hell does she have planned, and why do I feel like JC doesn't deserve it even though he's such a huge jackass?



AceofSpades (Signed) on May 12, 2015 03:00 pm (Chapter 8)
Oooh, ominious end. But, great chapter! Update whenever you can.



theusagirl (Signed) on May 10, 2015 08:51 pm (Chapter 8)

JC is such a sleaze, he probably also wanted that new girl Kym at the front desk too..HMPH!

And of course Ashley went with Chris, he is SO hilarious, I would choose Chris over JC..if JC wasn't such a jerk. :D

I love how Justin was talking to Delaney over the phone though, how respectful he is and unlike how Chris has described...

Good update...looking forward for more! :) 



Author's Response: Thanks, Stephy! Glad you're liking it :)



theusagirl (Signed) on Apr 03, 2015 09:09 pm (Chapter 7)

Oh snap! JUSTIN IS COMING! This is gonna be GOOD!

I SO laughed at these lines here:  “He’s usually so on top of things like this that-“ Delaney and Joey stopped dead in their tracks. She’d opened the door only to find JC and Morgan having sex on his desk.

“Looks like he’s found something else to be on top of.” Joey couldn’t help but crack a joke, even as awkward as the situation was.

LMAO!

I agree though, I did mention that Morgan is a b*tch and JC is so FULL OF HIMSELF! UGH! 

I also giggled at these lines here as well: What’s he doing here?” Chris asked when he’d met up with Joey and Ashley.

“I told you Joey asked us to meet him here!” Ashley answered.

“Oh. I didn’t see that part. I just saw something about meeting you in the corridor. I thought you wanted to do something kinky.” Chris raised his eyebrows playfully at her and Ashley rolled her eyes. Joey couldn’t help but chuckle.

Tee hee, I LOVE Chris.. :D

Fantastic chapter! Thanks for the update.. :) 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review and glad you enjoyed it!





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