Comments For Don't Look Back
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Dec 24, 2014 03:58 pm (Chapter 3: Have I Seen You Before?)
Oooh, that last line was writetn so well. I'm so glad you updated this! Was Lance having a panic attack?

Happy Holidays!



AceofSpades (Signed) on Jul 23, 2014 12:29 pm (Chapter 2: This Isn't Working)

I didn't realize you had updated. Great chapter. The ending was great and really making me want to see what would happen next.

 

This was my favorite part:

“Ugh, ‘I’m fine’ from you is like ‘I’m fine’ from a girl. It means you’re actually not fine, and it’s really freaking confusing.”

“Compare me to a girl one more time, and you’re gonna be less than half the man that you used to be.”

Justin groaned. “Song references are off limits. Especially the album fillers.”

Great job.

 




Bob (Anonymous) on Jul 22, 2014 07:33 pm (Chapter 2: This Isn't Working)
Lance needs to pelt out Single Ladies from the roof tops, yo



AwesomeSauce (Anonymous) on Jun 11, 2014 07:38 pm (Chapter 1: Done)
Tyler sucks eggs!!!! 



Ay Me! (Anonymous) on Jun 10, 2014 09:52 pm (Chapter 1: Done)

Wow. I mean, really, wow. I don't even like *NSYNC. I don't even know how I found this website. But if there's one thing I do know it's that this is some pretty good shit. Post the next chapter, NSYNCLVR, I really wanna know what happens next.

 




AceofSpades (Signed) on Jun 10, 2014 06:24 pm (Chapter 1: Done)

“Are you drunk?” he heard Joey’s voice reply. “What are you drinking? Whatever it is, stop it right now.”.......“Well, then there’s something in your coffee. ‘Cause I can’t even start to fathom why you would say you love that douchebag.”

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Favorite line from Joey! Plus, it was a great opening. yay for Lance for leaving Tyler. I think you captured the whole, "he hurts me, but I love him so I can't leave him" mentality perfectly here. I also love how you showed Joey and Lance's friendship, too.




AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Apr 11, 2014 03:25 pm (Prologue: Getting Out)
I thought I reviewed this already, but alas, I did'nt.

Anyway, great start here.





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