Comments For Don't Look Back
AwesomeSauce (Anonymous) on Jun 11, 2014 07:38 pm (Chapter 1: Done)
Tyler sucks eggs!!!! 



Ay Me! (Anonymous) on Jun 10, 2014 09:52 pm (Chapter 1: Done)

Wow. I mean, really, wow. I don't even like *NSYNC. I don't even know how I found this website. But if there's one thing I do know it's that this is some pretty good shit. Post the next chapter, NSYNCLVR, I really wanna know what happens next.

 




AceofSpades (Signed) on Jun 10, 2014 06:24 pm (Chapter 1: Done)

“Are you drunk?” he heard Joey’s voice reply. “What are you drinking? Whatever it is, stop it right now.”.......“Well, then there’s something in your coffee. ‘Cause I can’t even start to fathom why you would say you love that douchebag.”

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Favorite line from Joey! Plus, it was a great opening. yay for Lance for leaving Tyler. I think you captured the whole, "he hurts me, but I love him so I can't leave him" mentality perfectly here. I also love how you showed Joey and Lance's friendship, too.






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