Comments For Don't Look Back
AceofSpades (Signed) on Jul 23, 2014 12:29 pm (Chapter 2: This Isn't Working)

I didn't realize you had updated. Great chapter. The ending was great and really making me want to see what would happen next.

 

This was my favorite part:

“Ugh, ‘I’m fine’ from you is like ‘I’m fine’ from a girl. It means you’re actually not fine, and it’s really freaking confusing.”

“Compare me to a girl one more time, and you’re gonna be less than half the man that you used to be.”

Justin groaned. “Song references are off limits. Especially the album fillers.”

Great job.

 




Bob (Anonymous) on Jul 22, 2014 07:33 pm (Chapter 2: This Isn't Working)
Lance needs to pelt out Single Ladies from the roof tops, yo





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