Nik (Signed) on Jan 18, 2015 01:04 pm (Dead Batteries and Sugary Drinks)
I absolutely love the start of this and you have a great writing voice!

Author's Response: Woo, a new reader! Enjoy the rest of the chapters and thanks for taking the time to review!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 12, 2014 08:03 pm (Dead Batteries and Sugary Drinks)

Hi! :D *waves wildly*

I have been scanning this story for the past few days and haven't had the time to review, but now I do! AHH!

These lines here: JC Chasez. Fucking JC Chasez is sitting next to me and talking to me. What do I do? What. The. Fuck

OMG! What would I do?? I would be like Ari..LOL

I also like these lines here: Looking like a total creepy stalker girl that wants to have his babies? Will become a check if I don't get my ass in gear.

HA!

Oh! and I also like how you described his hands, my mind seriously went to the gutter..lolz

So far, this story is getting good! I'll review more when I get the chance.. :)

Nice to meet you, well not in person, but here I mean..lolz Ok I'll stop rambling now..tee hee..



Author's Response: OMG! I ♥ your detailed review! If you liked that description of his hands hurry and read all the way to Chapter 8&9. Be prepared...;)

Author's Response: OMG! I ♥ your detailed review! If you liked that description of his hands hurry and read all the way to Chapter 8&9. Be prepared...;)



heartless (Signed) on Jun 03, 2014 08:46 pm (Dead Batteries and Sugary Drinks)

This first chapter was enticing and only the start to what will be a great story, I'm sure! Definitely left me wanting to read more. I like the dynamic between Ari and JC and am excited to read more in the near future! Great job!



Author's Response: Thanks! Stay tuned real soon for the second chapter!



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jun 03, 2014 07:48 pm (Dead Batteries and Sugary Drinks)
I like it so far. I am looking forward to seeing how their freindship grows. Keep it up!!

Author's Response: First review! Thanks! Should have a second chapter real soon! Hope you'll enjoy!



Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 03, 2014 07:16 pm (Dead Batteries and Sugary Drinks)
I am definitely intrigued by this story and interested to see where this new found friendship leads to with these 2. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think these two will be good for each other. :)





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