JC on top?? Yes please.. ;) lolz and then I'll lay him down and -ok let me stop..LOL
I SO laughed when Ari told him that she was a Brian Littrell fan..tee hee, then she texted him later that it was JC all along..oh to exchange digits with that man..and everything else..one can dream.. :P
And I also giggled at these lines here: So I lied. You have always definitely been my favorite.
Grinning like a fool, he closes the message and slides the phone back into his pocket as his friend Jimmy walks into the room.
“What’s the goofy grin for?” his friend asks, taking the chair beside him and placing his stuff on the table.
“Inspiration.”
Nicely done..I'll read more.. Oh! I was supposed to update my story today, but I do have another story thats completed already, feel free to read/review them whenever you get the chance...thankies. :)
Author's Response:
I like their back and forth a whole lot as well, I think that's what makes them good for each other.
I'll check out your story!
Author's Response: :) Thanks for taking the time to review AND add me to your favrorites!
Author's Response: Will do! Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: I love that moment too, it had been in my head for some time and it was just what I needed! More JC deliciousness to come! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review this one! Stay tuned, something new coming soon!
I'm really enjoying this. Just one note of constructive criticism: watch your tenses. It kinda jumped from present to past tense throughout.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the constructive comment! I am going to go back and check it out now to make some changes. I just needed to get that out of me today and didn't pay enough attention apparently. Thanks again and I hope you enjoy the rest that is coming! :)
