KrisB (Anonymous) on Sep 10, 2015 06:11 am (Tell Me)
Delish! Totally reading this while at work and got caught so my face is red. Worth it though! Can't wait for more fooling around with these two. LOL

Author's Response: Bahahaha! Bad girl! Glad you 'enjoyed it' ;)



elle-miranda (Signed) on Jun 23, 2014 12:23 am (Tell Me)
Wow, Mama, this. Was. HOT! Are you sure this was your first time writing one of these? ;-) Excellent scene. And you did a great job separating Ari's & JC's points-of-view. This story is coming alone nicely...pun fully intended. ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks, it took me like 3 days to write it. I've read a million but never dared write one, guess I succeeded! 



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 18, 2014 11:05 pm (Tell Me)

Horrible?! Are you INSANE woman?! LOL This was HOT OMG!

It was seductive, and everything is explained in equixite detail... I love it ;) And I was gonna save this chapter for tomorrow, but its a GOOD thing I read this now before I went to bed.. :D Gonna have a good night sleep now..haha..

When JC tells Ari where does she want to be touched, I'm like, "You can touch me wherever you want.." :P

ANYWAYS...these lines here: He grins and turns to look at her again, “Oh honey, you ain’t seen nothin’ yet.”

Looking forward for more...oh yes sirree..Excellent chapter! :D



Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed the last three chapters. I hope you like the next ones too! As always I look forward to your reviews!



kb4jc (Signed) on Jun 12, 2014 08:41 pm (Tell Me)
U better write more and that was good for a first time.  Keep up the good work!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I love hearing from my readers and what they think!



AceofSpades (Signed) on Jun 12, 2014 06:40 pm (Tell Me)
*whistles* That was hot! Great writing, grea description and I liked the back and forth of the point of views as well

Author's Response: Teehee. Happy you enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Teehee. Happy you enjoyed it!



Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 12, 2014 05:50 pm (Tell Me)
Well my dear....that was H-O-T H-O-T H-O-T!! Very nicely done ;)

Author's Response: *bliush*





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