Megan (Anonymous) on Jul 22, 2014 09:57 pm (Cookie Dough and Suprises)
Oh my gosh! I would have just died if my boyfriend's parents walked in on me dancing around in sweats eating cookie dough. And yay! His parent like her :). Can't wait to read what happens next!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, next chapte is up!


theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 21, 2014 09:59 pm (Cookie Dough and Suprises)

That ending: “But if you don’t marry that girl, we’ll disown you" Reminds me of a scene in "Back to the Future" when Lorraine's father told her saying, "Lorraine, if you ever have a kid who acts that way we'll disown you.." LOL

Anyways, moving on, I laughed at this earlier because I could just imagine Ari's reaction.. tee hee.

“Uh-Hi.” She manages to stutter out.

He's still laughing! Traitor!

And when JC was with his niece, AWW! JC with kids is ADORABLE! He needs to get out of LA and find the right girl(me!) :D Hey, I can dream..lolz

So far, this is getting good! Thanks for the update!



Author's Response: I wanted to do something funny for the first meet and greet, glad you liked it!


champ (Signed) on Jul 21, 2014 09:14 pm (Cookie Dough and Suprises)

Awesome update!!! KEEP UPDATING!! Hope it is a long story!!

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks!


Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jul 21, 2014 06:27 pm (Cookie Dough and Suprises)
Go Mamma Chasez!!!! I loved how you wrote his mom!!! I just love this story! i hope Ari wasnt freaked out. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment, a little more Mamma Chasez coming in the next chapter.


Sarah (Signed) on Jul 21, 2014 04:19 pm (Cookie Dough and Suprises)
Owww! My ovaries are about to explode ha ha. This chapter was funny, adorable and just bloody lovely :)

Author's Response: LOL, that is basically Ari's reaction as well...see it in the next chapter :P




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