theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 31, 2015 10:05 pm (Fan Fiction and Symmetrical Carrots)

OMG THE SHOWER SCENE WAS SO HOT! It was steamy and perfect and just AHHH! :D And I can listen to JC singing lyrics like that..had me laughing..LOL But Wait..have I heard that  "Pass Me By song?? I listened to the rest of the unreleased demos that was posted, I don't remember that one..I gotta double check...lolz

And earlier in this chapter, I SO laughed at this! " When I go see my guy, I’ll ask him if he would take another client. I don’t see why he wouldn’t.”

Ari chuckles and raises a brow at his turned back, “You have a guy?”
LMAO

Overall, this was a very good chapter, so many fun moments, can't possibly post them all..awesome update!  Love LOVE! :D

 

 



Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it! Did you end up checking out the song? Wasn't it hilariously perfect? 




elle-miranda (Signed) on Jan 26, 2015 04:16 pm (Fan Fiction and Symmetrical Carrots)
LOOOOOVES IT! and i can't remember if i said it or not, but the last line, "i think that's the best damn song you've ever written..." is PERFECTION! 

Author's Response: :) :D :)






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