theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 12, 2015 10:03 pm (Chapter 2: At the Movies)

I've completely forgot about this story! LOL I had to refresh my mind a bit.

I honestly haven't seen Moulin Rouge either, just the song back in 2000..haha.

But I agree, I have a major soft spot for Chris, and he would do something like this to someone, especially for that girl Jamie, she reminds me of myself, even the hazel eyes give it away... :) Except that I'm way taller than her..lolz

I'll read more soon... :) 



Author's Response:

I don't blame you. This thing's been left alone for almost a year. Now I'm getting my spark back, which I'll take as a good omen. I'm forever starting stories, but you know I've got a good story (and how I feel about it) when I'm able to keep it going.

I saw a few MR clips on YouTube, and I thought, "Dang, don't watch this thing if you're already feeling blue." That's how I feel about Edward Scissorhands, too. Good story, impressive effects, dazzling music, but SHEESH!

I'd say I'm about the same height as Chris: 5 foot 6. Jamie's, what, 5 foot 2 or 3.



AceofSpades (Signed) on Jul 31, 2015 10:42 am (Chapter 2: At the Movies)
Everyone's going to see Moulin Rouge, eh? Chris was so funny in this chapter and you've captured him well. Off to chapter 3

Author's Response: Then again, that movie was a tremendous hit. If you thought this chapter was funny, wait until you read chapter 3.


DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jul 30, 2015 11:10 pm (Chapter 2: At the Movies)
I haven't seen it either...and yeah, I can see Chris being prince charming when needed. And then being our spastic crazy loving goofball. Yes, you, Christopher. Don't mind my muse, he's sticking out his tongue. There ya go. And if I've reviewed before now, it's so good, I have to leave multiple ones for when you update. Cause it's so fun to have reviews. Cheers, Mel!

Author's Response: It's fun and gratifying to receive reviews. No one's forced to review, but feedback does keep me and my stories going.


DiamondDoss (Anonymous) on Aug 19, 2014 06:57 am (Chapter 2: At the Movies)
Okay I hope you write more of this! And I haven't seen the movie either, even after all this time. "Do what did you do at the movie?" "Rescued damsel in distress.. Nothing much."

Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter now. It really all depends on how fast the ideas are coming and how well I'm able to write them down. That's the trickiest part: making it sound as good as it does in your head, or at least making it sound decent.


Pumples (Signed) on Aug 11, 2014 04:23 am (Chapter 2: At the Movies)

'Chris wanted to chase that guy down and customize his face.' I don't blame him! I'd be beetroot red too, and probably unable to look him in the eye. Hope she doesn't have that problem ;)



Author's Response: How humiliating is that? Even if only a few people were around to see it.


Sarah (Signed) on Aug 10, 2014 04:09 am (Chapter 2: At the Movies)

Frozen M&M's? That sounds delish, not something we get here in the UK, I want some.

Ahh Chris was a real gent and I agree I bet he is like that in real life. I look forward to more



Author's Response:

They're easy enough to make. You just put them in the freezer for a little while and then you take them out when you're ready to eat them. 

I'm really excited about this story. More ideas are coming! 





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