theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 31, 2015 09:36 pm (Chapter 14: Smooth Talk)

These lines here:

“We saved you some supper,” said Joey, who, for some odd reason, had a flowered dishtowel tucked into his belt.

LOL I can see Joey totally wearing that..

This chapter was short and sweet at the beginning, but glad that Justin gave Allie a piece of his mind.

Thanks for the update... :) 



Author's Response: I believe you could get Joey to do just about anything without shame. And Justin very ingeniously dismissed Allie (at least for that night) while giving her a few subtle slams.



DiamondDoss (Signed) on Aug 31, 2015 09:28 pm (Chapter 14: Smooth Talk)
Loved this chapter. Yay, a dinner "date" of sorts. And Allie just needs to wander off and forget she has Chris's number. And Justin..yes, I can see Justin or Joey lying through their teeth and being okay with it, at least when called for.

Author's Response: It's just a matter of when, not if. ;) Chris could easily change his number; problem is, he needs Allie's calls as "evidence," just in case, and now Jamie has access to that number and he doesn't want to cut her off, and imagine him trying to explain the reason for changing his number! All five guys are guilty of the sin of lying, but I'd say Joey or Justin would be the most suitable for this job. Plus, I decided to poke a little fun at Justin.



AceofSpades (Signed) on Aug 31, 2015 10:08 am (Chapter 14: Smooth Talk)

I was laughing soooo hard at this part:

 

 

Joey had an idea. “If she does call again,” he told Justin, “you take the call.”

“Why me?”

“Because you’re the smoothest liar out of all of us. If anyone can talk to Allie without sounding too suspicious, you can.”

Justin’s face darkened. “Is that supposed to be a compliment or an insult?”

With a serene smile, Joey replied, “Both. It’s an insult-iment.”

“Well, hardy-har-har.” 

 

I could easily see them doing that. Yeah, I remember hearing that Lance is the worst liar and I liked how you incorporated that into this. Can't wait for more.


 



Author's Response: I made myself laugh with that part, too. I also got a laugh out of Justin's talk with Allie. I could totally hear the sarcasm in his voice.





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