DiamondDoss (Signed) on May 22, 2016 04:03 pm (Chapter 15: She's Out of My Life)
Very nice chapter! Of course the King of Pop playing made it *that* much better. I feel so bad for my Topher. Hopefully he will figure out what is going on. Good to see you back, Mel. :)

Author's Response:

Very short scene, but very creepy. Wasn't planning on making this into a suspenseful story but I realized it would add nicely to the drama and excitement and it saves the story from being your typical cheesy love story. Not that this story won't have plenty of fuzzy romantic scenes later, of course! I would still put it under the "romance" category.






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