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theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 30, 2014 09:40 pm (The one and only chapter)

AWWWWW! THIS WAS SO ADORABLE! LOVE IT!

I SO laughed at these lines here:

"Michael!" He called loudly as he stood in the doorway of his open-plan living room and glanced once again over his shoulder to see if he could spot his cell-phone in his peripheral vision. To his dismay, he couldn't.

"What?" came the reply, shouted loudly, and from a distance. Michael was somewhere in the house, but Lance had no idea where. He wasn't concerned about that. All he really wanted to know was where his cell-phone was.

"My phone. I've lost it,” he explained in a loud and riled voice.

I can totally picture Lance looking for his phone, and having Michael look for it..after all, he scares him from time to time according to instagram vids..HA! :D

Anyways..I also laughed at this: Anyone who picked up Joey Fatone’s cell-phone by mistake would’ve known instantly that it belonged to him. They wouldn’t have needed to scan through his long list of contacts—of which there were hundreds, including the other members of *NSYNC—or his extensive photo album, which contained photographs as varied as dishes he’d eaten out at restaurants, his children, random crap he’d seen out and about that he’d snapped to send to his friends later, but had since forgotten all about, and his favorite candid snaps of his mates from back in the day—even a few of a very young, peroxide blonde, pre–SexyBack Justin Timberlake

And the ending was just sweet.. :) This was a GREAT read..nicely done.



Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)



simplyjessie73 (Signed) on Oct 29, 2014 09:12 pm (The one and only chapter)
luv. luv. luv. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much :)



DiamondDoss (Signed) on Oct 29, 2014 08:24 pm (The one and only chapter)
Anyone who picked up Joey Fatone’s cell-phone by mistake would’ve known instantly that it belonged to him. They wouldn’t have needed to scan through his long list of contacts—of which there were hundreds, including the other members of *NSYNC—or his extensive photo album, which contained photographs as varied as dishes he’d eaten out at restaurants, his children, random crap he’d seen out and about that he’d snapped to send to his friends later, but had since forgotten all about

Okay that was my favorite part. And as far as Chris sending the message. I love it. It sounds like something he would do. So glad to have you on the site and posting stories!! Great job and can't wait to see more from you. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much :) It's so great how nice and supportive everyone is on here. Thanks for taking the time to review!



AceofSpades (Signed) on Oct 29, 2014 08:16 pm (The one and only chapter)
This was so good! I loved it! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! And thanks for your review :)



ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Oct 29, 2014 07:54 pm (The one and only chapter)
This was really sweet! Way to go! Thanks for taking the challenge!

Author's Response:

Thanks! It kinda came out of nowhere. I was thinking about what all the guys might be thankful for, and remembered the interview way back when pretty much all of them said they couldn't live without their cell phones. That got me thinking about the illusive group texts they are rumoured to send each other, and with Thanksgiving coming up soon it just seemed right.

I'm really excited to read other's interpretation of the challenge now! Thanks for the nudge to get writing. It's just what I needed before the start of NaNoWriMo! (and also for making me feel so welcome and included.)






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