Oh Court, I love this story. And Justin in the kitchen..sighs. You always pull at the heartstrings with every story you write and this one certainly is like that.

Glad to see that even though Fay has to communicate with a computer, she's still her self. I think it's great Justin wants to open a restaurant. I think it will make him happier than making partner at the law firm. Plus, this benefits him taking care of Tyler if he fights for custody. I really hope his dad isn't able to get Tyler because he is going to try to turn him into something he's not. So glad Maggie decided to partner with him. Can't wait until the next chapter.

Thought I reviewed this already. GREAT chapter. Justin and Fay just about broke my heart, but I love how she still has her sense of humor. That sibling bond really translates well through the page. I'm not just reading it, but I'm seeing it. Great chapter.

I absolutely love this story. It feels very real. The dialogue and interactions between Justin and Fay are hard to read in a way because I can just see it and hear it, but I really love it because its realistic. I personally don't know anybody with ALS but I know its not a peice of cake for the person with it or their family. So I love how you've written about it. I feel so bad for Tyler. He's Having to go through this at such a young age, but it would be worse if he went to boarding school and Benjamin took over his life and made him this robot. I'm glad he has Justin. I'm so glad Justin has Maggie. I'm glad they have each other. I'm happy Justin has somebody in his corner pushing him and believing in him, and I love that Fay really likes her. Yay for Justin deciding to do what he loves in life!! I'm sure Benjamin won't like it and he'll try his best intimidation tactics, but who cares what he does and doesn't like. He wouldn't be happy with Justin either way, with any choice he makes, so why continue to let him rule your life Justin? I hope Justin sticks it to him and I know Maggie, his partner in every way, will be right behind him. Interesting about his Mom though and how it is starting to feel different between her and Justin. Can't wait to read more!

I still don't trust Benjamin. That is all.