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d_simplicity (Signed) on Jan 14, 2015 08:42 pm (Chapter 2)
Oh boy, this is good. I laughed so much. haha Very nice. Curious to see the gaps between their relationship from where it started to now. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much! You'll definitely see all the gaps! :)



MochaB (Signed) on Jan 14, 2015 03:35 pm (Chapter 2)
Whoop!! So happy and excited to see a new story from you! I always enjoy reading your stories. The dialogue is always so good and so funny. I'm really loving this so far. Macy's meeting with Justin was incredibly humorous. I can't wait to read more about their past relationship and how it became what it is today. And although I don't know about those "high class" neighborhoods in California, an organic veggie sale sounds sadly realistic. LOL update soon!! :o)

Author's Response: Thanks, you always leave such thoughtful reviews! 



Hollie (Signed) on Jan 13, 2015 01:31 pm (Chapter 2)
The worst thing is, I can just picture certain people who probably would suggest organic vegetable sales.

Author's Response: haha sadly true!



DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jan 12, 2015 09:47 pm (Chapter 2)
Okay I so LOVED this chapter and want more. And this...
“I’ll tell you what. You can pick out any vegetable you want and I’ll cook it for dinner.The freedom!”

“Wow, an early birthday present!”

“Am I the best mom ever, or what?”

That sounds like me and the 8 year old. LOL He would say that to me.

Author's Response: ha, thanks! I love that Chris and Mac sound like you and your son!



AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Jan 12, 2015 07:39 pm (Chapter 2)

Awww, Christopher is adorable. I loved how he kept bringing up iPhones, thats such a kid thing to do. I love his character already.

And I was thinking the exact same thing about the organic foods sale. I'm so glad you updated. Awesome chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! Chris sure wants that iPhone! :)





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