Comments For Our Story
god gave me style (Signed) on Jan 18, 2015 10:50 am (Chapter 3)
"Are you one of those hippie kids?" made me snort, lol.
Author's Response: Ha, thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Author's Response: Ha, thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
AceofSpades (Signed) on Jan 18, 2015 10:01 am (Chapter 3)
Awww, the chapter is over. I love their banter, it flows so well and it's so realistic. I loved their music conversation.
I can't wait for more. The diction and syntax in this story is incredible and keeps the reader wanting more. Awesome job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
I can't wait for more. The diction and syntax in this story is incredible and keeps the reader wanting more. Awesome job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
