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MochaB (Signed) on May 12, 2015 02:39 pm (Chapter 16)

I wish Mac would tell him how she really feels. I don't care that it was 5 years ago since the last time or 8 or 10 or a week. Lol she needs to tell him. She spends all her time protecting him and his feelings but who's looking out for her? Who's helping her? I don't want her to tell him in hopes that he will suddenly want to be with her again, Ijust  want her to tell him cause its a lot of hurt to hold onto and he should know how the whole situation makes her feel. It's so annoying to me. He's not in the same place mentally and emotionally he was back then when this child mess was going on, so he needs to hear it all and deal with it like a man. And how can he even think asking her to marry him back then is the same as asking Kate now?! Him and Mac were dealing with a super crazy situation that wouldn't have been as crazy if he didn't have psychotic people on his team and a psycho B of a mom. It doesn't matter how many times he asked. Cause you know he was so super romantic with his asking anyway and was doing it for the right reasons... :o/ and the woman he's about to marry doesn't even know about Chris and that wasn't even a surprise. She's probably the real gold digger and his idiot mom probably thinks she's an angel. She may not be but I'm just saying, if she has any bad qualities I'm sure his mom doesn't realize seeing as how she herself is a horrible person. Chris...I can understand how he's feeling a little overwhelmed with having to see his dad after not seeing him for 13 years. Even if it is on the weekends and all day that's a lot considering he had no interaction with him previously. But he needs to cut the attitude with his mom for sure. I'd put an end to that real quick. Anyway, the debate over her tumbling down a canyon or a cliff or a hill was so funny. What's going to happen now that she'll probably be temporarily immobilized for a little bit? Update soon!! :o)



Author's Response:

Oh boy! Mac is in a weird position, she doesn't want to bring it up and make it weird, especially now that Chris is finally getting the chance to meet his father! But you're right she protects him too much, that will be discussed in an upcoming chapter for sure ;-)

I love how you're hating Kate already even though we don't really know anything about her yet (Team Mac all the way! haha)

And Chris... yeah exactly

As always, thanks for the awesome review! <3 




Nikki (Anonymous) on May 06, 2015 01:53 pm (Chapter 16)
An appreciated update:)

Author's Response: Thank you dear!



Hollie (Signed) on May 06, 2015 11:13 am (Chapter 16)
Knuckleheads. I want to smack said heads together, once she's over her concussion

Author's Response: haha so kind of you to wait for her to get over her concussion before giving her another one ;-)





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