THIS:
"You’re heading out?” the bartender asked, taking his empty shot class, setting it down on his side of the wooden table top. He lifted a damp rag into his hand and started to clean off a beer glass. “So soon?”
I REALLY thought that the bartender guy was trying to flirt with JC! ROFL
But the girl that walked into the bar, that must be Maxine am I right?? I can't read the next chapter now, but I'll find out soon enough..this story looks good! :)
Author's Response: Haha, I didn't even intended for that with the bartender! Glad you're enjoying it. Yes, it is Maxine. :)
I need to steal this line and use it.. my muses just chuckled at me and shook their heads "Come on, Goldilocks, we’ve got some bears to hunt for".
Author's Response: Haha, go right ahead. I laughed out loud when I thought about it. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
you know what's REALLY not fair? that you ended the chapter there!! :-D
Great start! I can't wait to read what happens next with JC and Maxine. Also? You're doing a terrific job with these JC stories!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I get so nervous writing for a new NSYNC member but I'm glad you're liking it so far! :)
I get a multi-chapter story?! Woo!
I am really liking it so far. I totally was thinking dirty before I finished the sentence about the first Valentine leaving her for a girl with a bigger box of chocolates...lol...turns out it was a litteral box of chocolates...
Funny moments too with the grape allergy discovery!
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yes! You get a multi-chapter story! Yay, I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far! I was so excited to see that I was writing for you! :)
