Comments For The Beach House
elle-miranda (Signed) on Jul 10, 2016 05:28 am (Chapter 6-As Told by Liv & Koren)

ice cream, and jc on top. i mean...um...wait, what? that's not what you said. i'm so distracted now. 

ahem. loved this one. liv is so angry! with chris. with kate. and chris has some major issues with kate! and that dream from the beginning...what and WHO?! and i feel bad for koren because she doesn't even fully have a clue as to what's going on under the surface with her friends. although, kate doesn't seem clued in to liveither.

so many layers and so much to peel away. i am enjoying this SO MUCH. it reminds me tiny bit of that one christopher pike story (did you read cp as a teenager?) where all of these kids get together for what's supposed to be a weekend of debauchery, and a reunion of sorts from the last time they did it...and someone almost died. i have to look up the name of it. anyway, great job, my dear. soooo looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response: LOL I'm so glad you liked it, sweet Beta ;) I didn't read CP as a kid (too scary for me!) but thanks for the comparison :) 



Burgundy (Signed) on Jul 09, 2016 01:35 pm (Chapter 6-As Told by Liv & Koren)
I love the layers of mystery that linger throughout.  Excited to see what happens next!  Great story!

Author's Response: Thank you! More coming soon :) It's been fun writing a mystery for sure





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