Comments For Bittersweet
MochaB (Signed) on May 21, 2015 07:55 pm (Chapter 2: Rebecca)

Man I wanted this to go for one or two more chapters!! What a freaking jerk! What a freaking male! Does no wrong, can't even see how hurtful he's being by what he's saying, then turns it around and wants his girl to baby him. Now look at him...realizing what he's messing up royally and now all panicked and sentimental. Yeah boy you're about to loose all of this *gestures at her body* lol great little short!! :o)



Author's Response:

Thanks! I originally wanted it to go on a couple more chapters too, but couldn't get my act together! Maybe I'll add more to it someday. It's not good for me to focus on more than one story, then it never gets finished!

 

 



Nikki (Anonymous) on May 20, 2015 09:41 am (Chapter 1: Justin)
Very well done.

Author's Response: Thanks dear!


Hollie (Signed) on May 20, 2015 06:38 am (Chapter 2: Rebecca)

Well. He was being a total asshole. Yep, I said it. Asshole.

Good job, boo xxx



Author's Response: You said it! Thanks :-)


DiamondDoss (Signed) on May 19, 2015 11:05 pm (Chapter 2: Rebecca)
I was reading and went.. "Nooooo!!!" It can't be over. Can you keep writing on it? I want more! LOL

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Maybe I'll add more at some point but not just yet! :-)


Hollie (Signed) on May 19, 2015 12:14 pm (Chapter 1: Justin)
Well that's a hell of a way to bring up having kids, JT. She just got fired and you didn't even give her a ring yet. lol

Author's Response: haha yeah, typical dude, right? ;)


DiamondDoss (Signed) on May 18, 2015 08:30 pm (Chapter 1: Justin)
Oh snap! I about squealed really loud when I saw you had an IGBM story up!! Can't wait for the next part!

Author's Response: Aww so sweet, thanks for reading!




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