hubby (Anonymous) on Jun 08, 2015 02:12 pm (
Prologue)
amzing intro!
Pumples (Signed) on Jun 07, 2015 11:59 am (
Chapter 6)
'But I'm afraid like the Titanic, I'm sunk.'
Love the ending!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Pumples (Signed) on Jun 07, 2015 07:34 am (
Chapter 5)
“Someone's gonna need to draw me a flow chart,” he says. Awww poor Shazam. Try to keep up JC.
Pumples (Signed) on Jun 07, 2015 07:27 am (
Chapter 4)
OOohh!
Pumples (Signed) on Jun 07, 2015 07:17 am (
Chapter 3)
Yeah that'll be nice *snort* ;) :D
Pumples (Signed) on Jun 07, 2015 06:00 am (
Chapter 2)
“We're going to die here,” I say to Amiyah as we follow.
Mwahaha.
Love it!
Pumples (Signed) on Jun 07, 2015 05:51 am (
Chapter 1)
Ha ha. Red flags for Justin. Poor little J, always the one getting picked on. You be nice to him!
BTW, this was the kind of story I was all over as a teenager, and I am a little surprised but not at all ashamed to find I'm the same as a twenty something. Can't wait to read more.
Pumples (Signed) on Jun 07, 2015 05:41 am (
Prologue)
:)
elle-miranda (Anonymous) on Jun 06, 2015 11:20 pm (
Prologue)
MORE. :D
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jun 06, 2015 08:54 pm (
Chapter 6)
I love this whole story but I'm a worthless grinning person right now, thanks to Fatone. I'm a sucker. More more!!
Alysen Blaine (Signed) on Jun 06, 2015 08:40 pm (
Chapter 6)
I love each POV and how I could literally picture all of this happening as I read it! You already know I love this story. So please MORE MORE MORE
:D
AceofSpades (Signed) on Jun 06, 2015 08:37 pm (
Chapter 6)
Oh ho ho. Absolutely LOVED that last line. It was a perfect way to round out that whole scene. Great chapter
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 03, 2015 03:01 pm (
Chapter 5)
This chapter really made me giggle.Love your writing and LOVE this story.
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Jun 03, 2015 08:55 am (
Chapter 5)
Great chapter. I was laughing the whole way through.
elle-miranda (Signed) on Jun 02, 2015 12:53 pm (
Chapter 5)
as well you know, i've read this several times already. but every time i read this: “
That why these are here?” he asks, dangling the women's underwear from his finger. “Souvenir?”
I snatch them from his hand. “Like the women you've been with haven't left behind worse. Mostly STDs.”
i literally laugh out loud. oh man. have i mentioned how much i lurve this story?
Author's Response: I think that one's gonna go in my collection of favorite Lance one-liners. ;)
