Comments For If I'm Not The One
Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Jul 27, 2015 11:17 pm (Chapter 1)
This caught my eye, and I thought I'd steal a peek or two. So far, so okay. I like your dialogue the best; it sounds like stuff real-live people would say. If you're interested, I've got a hospital story of my very own, called "Fading Sun." It features Joey because I felt we could use more Joey stories; goodness knows how many stories there are around here that feature Justin and JC. Not that it's a bad thing, but still...yeah.
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy writing dialogue and I believe in making the speech sound 'real'. Thank you also, for the recommendation. I will have to check out your story. I'm sure it's wonderful. Joey is a fun person to write. I know in my stories he's a support character, but I feel like he's easy to capture. I hope you'll keep reading and keep enjoying my story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy writing dialogue and I believe in making the speech sound 'real'. Thank you also, for the recommendation. I will have to check out your story. I'm sure it's wonderful. Joey is a fun person to write. I know in my stories he's a support character, but I feel like he's easy to capture. I hope you'll keep reading and keep enjoying my story.
theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 27, 2015 10:53 pm (Chapter 1)
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for the kind words. More is coming! :)
*GASP* Hmm..why does he feel the urge to protect Cassandra...because he is her knight in shining armor! AWW! :D So JC was admitted at the hospital for dehydration and exhaustion just like Cassandra??
I laughed at these lines here though: Hey guy. I really miss you.” He looked at the dark haired man solemnly. “How much longer do you have to be stuck in this hell-hole?”
“Hopefully not much longer. I can’t get them to take out this damned I.V. They claim my blood work still indicates I haven’t been fully hydrated. What a crock!”
HA!
Would read/review more soon..I'm a bit behind on reviewing some stories, but I'm catching up! Looks good! :D
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for the kind words. More is coming! :)
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2015 12:18 pm (Chapter 1)
So far, your writing has never disappointed me. :) I hope you keep posting.
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. I only hope you continue to enjoy these. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. I only hope you continue to enjoy these. :)
