You know, every time I see your title, *NSYNC’s “If I’m Not the One” automatically starts playing in my head. (Not that it’s a bad thing, of course!) It actually took me a while to warm up to that song, and I may warm up to your story soon enough, too.

Sorry if I came off as less-than-enthusiastic earlier. I guess I just feel like there are so many stories about JC and Justin already, and I don’t know yet what makes this story any different. Still, I’ll give you AND your story an honest shot.

JC’s being a real sweetie here. Might be overdoing it a little, but then again, I’d rather have a guy be too nice than too mean. Aside from the dialogue, you also do a superb job with the descriptions. It’s like I’m there, seeing and touching and even tasting for myself.

I found myself laughing when JC said, “Oh, man!  Now you’re condemning both of us to an indefinite stay in hell!” I had no problem at all, imagining such words coming out of his mouth. 

And it went to my heart when he told Cass, “I like you. You seem to like me. We enjoy spending time together doing inane things like watching South Park and other cartoons. But, because I’m some kind of celebrity, we can’t be together. So, when we get discharged, I go back to my ivory tower somewhere and you’ll take your flowers, and memories, and go home to your little sister and just forget about everything we shared for these few brief days. Does that about sum it up?” To that, I can only respond with, “Ouch!” 

And then I just had to go “awww” when he said, “If you won’t call me JC or one of my nicknames, then don’t call me anything.  I will not answer to ‘Mr. Chasez’!”

At the mention of Suzie, I could hear that famous “dun-dun-DUNNNN!” playing, and I had to admire JC’s throwback to Johnny: “Manage my career, not my life.” For some people, it’s next to impossible to know the difference.

As for this Thomas fellow, I reserve judgment for the time being.

Thomas Wood?? What a stupid name..LOL who is he?? And who is Suzie..Suzie needs to stop being a b*tch and calling Johnny every 24/7 checking up on JC..GRRR..

This story is SO good though, its like watching a dramatic Spanish soap opera! HA! :D

Earlier in this chapter, these lines here: Cassandra, beautiful flowers for my beautiful new friend.  Glad we were held captive together.  JC’

AWW! JC you are so sweet, I must read more! *reads next chapter*