You do a great job with the suspense, and the tension between JC and Cass (hope you don’t mind that I call her that) is very tangible. I “aww”-ed at the way he carried her to the couch when she got a dizzy spell, and when he comforted her after her terrible dream.

Also, I got a chuckle out of “Here I’ve slaved over a hot cardboard container to fix you one of the finest meals money can buy, and you’re going to refuse to eat it?  I don’t believe I can tolerate that!” I’ll repeat what I said before; your dialogue is easily one of the best aspects of the story.

THAT'S RIGHT! JC is not going anywhere, he's gonna stay there and watch her like a hawk.. :D

Ok, Thomas needs to go away, he said he was sorry, Pssh, please don't give me that crap..it was JC that was there with Cassandra all along at the hospital, not Thomas Wood.. -_- 

But what could be bothering Cassandra, that nightmare she had, there's something going b/tween her ex and her, and that nightmare.

I think Thomas and Suzie should get together instead and leave JC and Cassandra alone in peace..

*reads next chapter*