Comments For If I'm Not The One
Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Aug 22, 2015 11:03 pm (Chapter 9)

I found Marissa’s reaction to JC quite amusing, though it was sweet how he took it in stride and acted like the perfect gentleman. It was also funny how JC answered Cass’s questions for her at the interview and Johnny had to (almost literally) kick him out.

I loved Joey’s cameo appearance, too. The fact that he’s with Suzie, of all people, definitely perks my interest. It’s like, “Okay, buddy, what’s going on here?” The next chapter I have GOT to see.



Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far.  I will admit, Joey doesn't make an appearance in Chapter 10.  But, neither does Suzie!  LOL  I still hope you enjoy it.  Thank you for reading!



theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 21, 2015 11:55 pm (Chapter 9)

WOW! That was some twist..who would've thought, Joey of all people, but hmm..maybe Suzie was leading him on, or something..

But earlier in this chapter, these lines here: “Oh, my God!”  She squealed.  “You’re not JC.  You’re JC!  Oh, my God!” LOL I would be excited too if JC went into my house like that..but then I would've calmed down after a while..

And during the Cassandra and Johnny interview, JC, you don't have to be so pushy, Cassandra can speak for herself, jeez! Thanks Johnny.. :)

Good chapter, looking forward for more... 



Author's Response: Thank you! This was a fun chapter to write. I loved the interaction between JC and Johnny and the reaction of Marissa I thought would be typical of me!  LOL I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story.  There's only a few chapters left!  :)





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