Comments For If I'm Not The One
Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Aug 30, 2015 05:19 pm (Chapter 10)
Oh wow, that's one of the most intense chapters I've ever read. It was enough to make my stomach turn, and I could see everything as clearly as if it were on a TV screen. Just...dang! :O
Author's Response: It was a tough chapter to write, too. I'm sorry it turned your stomach, though. The way you "saw" it is exactly the way I was able to write it - I had to visualize it as it went. Thank you for your feedback. :)
Author's Response: It was a tough chapter to write, too. I'm sorry it turned your stomach, though. The way you "saw" it is exactly the way I was able to write it - I had to visualize it as it went. Thank you for your feedback. :)
theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 26, 2015 11:01 pm (Chapter 10)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I love writing JC as a badass! :)
YES! GO GET LANCE! So that way Marissa won't be left out.. :D
But OMG! WTF THAT CRAZY THOMAS SHIZNET, SO GLAD HE'S FREAKIN GONE! He better NOT be back! Or else I would blow his head! BOOM!
These lines here: GO JC GO! Now, if you don’t shut the hell up, I might just have to crush your windpipe with my foot! Any questions?”
HA! So freakin happy that JC beat up Thomas! Poor Cassandra, she's been through so much, and now that JC is there to comfort her...
Now, I think Lynette should go with Justin, maybe they'll be good together... :)
Awesome chapter and great update! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I love writing JC as a badass! :)
