Comments For Bear vs Beard
theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 02, 2015 10:03 pm (The one and only chapter)
Mel turned furiously on him. “Revenge?” she shrieked, her brows furrowing so deep she looked almost comic. “How old are you?”
Justin opened his mouth to answer like the smart-ass that he was, but sensing the anger emanating from Mel decided at the last minute to close his mouth before uttering a word. It was a sensible decision and proved he could be mature... when his life depended on it.
HA! :D
This story was hilarious, the thought of Chris and Joey arguing and bickering with eachother in a tiny bus bathroom, I cam totally picture this.
Great job on this story..loved it. :)
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Aug 02, 2015 08:25 pm (The one and only chapter)
“It's pathetic!” she replied, although her voice was lacking a little of its previous venom. Damn those killer brown eyes, and that smirk... “You've broken Chris!”
Chris met her eyes in the mirror, where he'd been trying to analyse just how bad his 'new look' was, and pulled an apologetic face. He knew how much she usually loved his facial hair and hoped this wouldn't hurt his running in the ongoing campaign for her heart. No matter what he did, he couldn't ever seem to shake his competition enough to win her undivided attention, and he wondered if this would be a further setback. How would Mel have reacted if his opponent had been the one to lose his beard instead of him?
I'm not sure what I loved more. Joey being a complete and utter moron, or Chris worrying about how he'd look..and then me feeling bad that he'd worry if I didn't love him.
And then J... Oh Justin. I love to hate you at times. And vice versa is true.
Thank you my dear friend. You're still on the wrong side of the road. :P
Chris met her eyes in the mirror, where he'd been trying to analyse just how bad his 'new look' was, and pulled an apologetic face. He knew how much she usually loved his facial hair and hoped this wouldn't hurt his running in the ongoing campaign for her heart. No matter what he did, he couldn't ever seem to shake his competition enough to win her undivided attention, and he wondered if this would be a further setback. How would Mel have reacted if his opponent had been the one to lose his beard instead of him?
I'm not sure what I loved more. Joey being a complete and utter moron, or Chris worrying about how he'd look..and then me feeling bad that he'd worry if I didn't love him.
And then J... Oh Justin. I love to hate you at times. And vice versa is true.
Thank you my dear friend. You're still on the wrong side of the road. :P
creativechaos (Anonymous) on Aug 02, 2015 05:31 pm (The one and only chapter)
I can't even begin to express how much I laughed at this. Funniest thing I've read all year. And so Joey and Chris, you nailed them perfectly. You nailed Mel perfectly too. I'm in complete and utter love.
Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Aug 02, 2015 03:40 pm (The one and only chapter)
Very amusing. :P To quote a famous saying, "Boys will be boys." Then again, I could use a laugh nowadays, so that's fine with me.
Nice job, matey. :)
