Comments For All I Ask
charleeene (Signed) on Jun 16, 2016 04:04 pm (Chapter 1)
Wow, this was a great first chapter! It left me wanting to know more about Charlie's backstory. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it so far. There is a lot more to come with her backstory. Bit by bit, it will all be revieled. :) Thanks!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it so far. There is a lot more to come with her backstory. Bit by bit, it will all be revieled. :) Thanks!
LadyX (Signed) on May 23, 2016 11:06 am (Chapter 1)
I really like this idea of him just going off on his own. I'm also like Charlie; tough but fragile at the same time. Good job!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 22, 2016 12:12 pm (Chapter 1)
I'm intrigued. Post more soon, please!
Author's Response: I hope you stay intrigued! I have so many ideas for this story. Thanks for checking it out.
Author's Response: I hope you stay intrigued! I have so many ideas for this story. Thanks for checking it out.
Alysen Blaine (Signed) on May 21, 2016 05:50 am (Chapter 1)
Terrific job yet again! I really like your descriptiveness of Charlie and JC. Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: I worry I might get too verbose at times but I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Thank you!
Author's Response: I worry I might get too verbose at times but I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Thank you!
