Comments For All I Ask
Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 18, 2020 03:08 am (Chapter 3)

Oh wow I am loving this




charleeene (Signed) on Jun 20, 2016 08:23 pm (Chapter 3)

This chapter got me excited for what would be happening in the next one.

The Beauty and the Beast/Stockholm Syndrome was probably my favorite part though because that's also my favorite Disney movie haha

 

Great job! 



Author's Response:

Yay!  Glad you're liking it!

Beauty and the Beast is my fav too! 




Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 27, 2016 07:44 pm (Chapter 3)
I love Charlie! Post more soon :)

Author's Response:

I'm loving writing Charlie.  I hope I'm able to properly portray how I envision her personality in my head into words.

Thanks for the review! 




elle-miranda (Signed) on May 27, 2016 02:31 pm (Chapter 3)

he's getting under her skin, and i like it. ;-) i'm also really, really looking forward to getting into charlie's head more. what are her secrets?

also, there are a few topics i get very...uncomfortable with in fanfiction. they're potentially triggering and i find that a lot of people aren't capable of handling them with delicacy and nuance and...experience...they require. i know that sounds pretty obnoxious because who am i to tell someone what they can or cannot write about. all of that said, i'm very impressed with the way you've introduced charlie's self-harming. it's not  heavy-handed or melodramatic. great job.



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you for your response.  It truly means a lot to me.  I knew the subject of self harming could be a touchy one.  The subject of mental health is one that I take very seriously.  It's a part of Charlie that the readers need to know but it by no means defines her; it's one of the many layers of her.  People who live with mental health issues can be productive, contributing members of society while navigating through their way through trying times.  Okay, I went off on a tangent.  My apologies.  :) 

You by no means came across as obnoxious and I again thank you for comments.  I appreciate that you feel I have handled the subject respectfully.




LadyX (Signed) on May 27, 2016 12:58 pm (Chapter 3)
I'm so curious as to what happened to her, what she's running from. How come she needs the release of self harm in order to cope. I like their developing relationship. Good job, looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it so far.  All will be revealed soon enough, I promise.  :)

I'm trying not to rush their blooming relationship too quickly.  I want a good build up.  I have to pace myself because I have so many ideas and plot lines for this story.






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