I'm really enjoying this story so far. Your characters are well developed and believable. Your portrayal of self harm is delicate and not over the top and hits well on mental health issues. I think your portrayal of JC is great and a lot how I imagine he could be in real life. Bravo, looking forward to the next update! :-)

Author's Response: Yay!  Thank you for checking it out and reviewing.  Glad you're enjoying it so far.  I hope I continue to do the characters and the story justice.  :)

This is great stuff!!

Author's Response: :)  Thank you!

I do like the way her secrets are slowly starting to come out. I laughed at the poking the bear line. I'm curious about the locked door and the possible other job though, look forward to more!

Author's Response:

Why thank you!  Gotta give everyone just enough to keep them coming back.  :)

I've been on a kick lately at work saying "don't poke the bear" so I worked it into my story.  I'm such a dork!