Comments For All I Ask
Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 18, 2020 10:20 pm (Chapter 10)
Great chapter. I love how confident JC is in his abilities haha.
Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Jul 12, 2016 11:40 pm (Chapter 10)
Finally, these two are getting somewhere. Charlie gave a hell of a lot in my opinion, but it seems to me that her mind and body are not connected. She's way more willing to have sex with JC than to reveal anything about herself, and that's telling. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Charlie did give a lot but there is still move brewing under the surface. I love your observation of her and you're hitting the nail on the head. She tells herself she's going to talk to JC but always finds a way out. She obviously has issues with confrontation. More revealed soon. Can't give too much away here. :) Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Charlie did give a lot but there is still move brewing under the surface. I love your observation of her and you're hitting the nail on the head. She tells herself she's going to talk to JC but always finds a way out. She obviously has issues with confrontation. More revealed soon. Can't give too much away here. :) Thanks for the review!
LadyX (Anonymous) on Jul 09, 2016 11:21 am (Chapter 10)
Love the words of the song. Perfect for the story. I enjoyed your update!
Author's Response: Eeeek! Thank you! I fretted over the lyrics for days. I almost decided to cut it from the story. Glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully I can post more soon.
Author's Response: Eeeek! Thank you! I fretted over the lyrics for days. I almost decided to cut it from the story. Glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully I can post more soon.
ComplicateMe (Signed) on Jul 08, 2016 09:17 pm (Chapter 10)
Finally found the time to read the last two chapters...I am so fixated with the story and where it's going. Love all the layers Charlie has and the progression of the storyline is super believable. Kudos and can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Thank you! Sometimes I get a little OCD on details and I have to reign myself in. Lol.
I appreciate the review and that you're liking the story.
