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Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 18, 2020 11:08 pm (Chapter 12)

Oh wow. I had a feeling it was something more than a marriage she was grieving. Great job. Super hot chapter, too. 




LadyX (Signed) on Jul 25, 2016 11:28 am (Chapter 12)
There it is. Revelations! Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Yay for revelations!  More of them on the horizon.  Thanks for reading as always!



Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Jul 25, 2016 03:47 am (Chapter 12)

I can't be the only one who let out a 'finally' at these two being intimate with each other. But it was a win, because her mind and body were finally able to connect and enjoy the moment with him.

I honestly didn't know what to think about JC's reaction at the ending of the last chapter, but now it makes sense. There's still so much to uncover, but we're getting there and it makes me all the more intrigued to know about her.

That ending.... I had a feeling, still, I'm interested in that story. It plays a major role in the how she is unable to be alone with herself.



Author's Response:

I'm pretty sure I too let out a 'finally' and I'm writing the damn thing.  LOL.  I wanted a good foundation and build up to the moment it happened.

As for the ending, I swear you live in my head!  Hahaha.  You're very perceptive.  Thank you for the review. 




Sweetdreams32 (Signed) on Jul 23, 2016 03:47 pm (Chapter 12)
This is getting so good!!! I can't  wait for more!

Author's Response:

:)  I'm glad you think so.  I have the next chapter mostly written.  Just doing my tweaking.  My OCD gets kinda outta control. :/

Thanks for the review!  






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