IvyVega (Signed) on Oct 10, 2022 09:59 pm (Break)

Oh I know that's what happened with the test. 

Just figured she was smarter than to think that

could happen in the hot tub.  :/ 

I am really enjoying the story, but she has been making herself look

really bad. :( 

(So is Justin, though. She's married- she's being a brat.) 

 



Author's Response:

She was with JC in the hot tub. Things with Justin happened in the water after snorkling.

I realize I made her too naive.

As always, many thanks for your feedback! <3




IvyVega (Signed) on Oct 10, 2022 09:59 pm (Break)

Oh I know that's what happened with the test. 

Just figured she was smarter than to think that

could happen in the hot tub.  :/ 

I am really enjoying the story, but she has been making herself look

really bad. :( 

(So is Justin, though. She's married- she's being a brat.) 

 




IvyVega (Signed) on Oct 09, 2022 01:14 pm (Break)

You cannot get pregnant this way... :/ (like she thinks she did ) 

Eve is making it really hard for me to like her...lol...

Is she serious?



Author's Response:

Yes, she's serious as she has no other explanation for that test result. (The young nurse who took the sample from Justin instead of JC didn't change their names.)

I understand that Eve is losing sympathy since the threesome happened. I intended to cause this kind of frustration, but hopefully not too much.

Thank you for your feedback! :)

 






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