Comments For Count to Ten
JTlover1989 (Signed) on Aug 31, 2023 02:41 pm (Chapter 1)

Hot!

Sheesh I am super jealous of this character right now! Lol 



Author's Response:

I wrote it in first person so you feel like it's you, not someone else.




MissM (Signed) on Aug 31, 2023 11:23 am (Chapter 1)

 “You’re so poetic in the middle of foreplay.” :D

 




PopDiva (Signed) on Aug 31, 2023 10:56 am (Chapter 1)

Wow!!!!

I loved the line "If this is what you are like after 3, you'll be incoherent by 10."  Just enough humour in the middle of all the intensity.

 

Loved the ending too. Nice surprise. 






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