Comments For He lived up stairs.
mozie (Anonymous) on Sep 06, 2007 11:18 am (prelude.)
love the new chapter. much better on grammar and content. keep the updates coming
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know, and thanks for responding. (updates coming soon)
mozie (Anonymous) on Sep 05, 2007 10:34 am (prelude.)
I love this story, but this chapter is a little confusing. The grammar and some run on sentences have me confused as to the content of this chapter. I still look forward to more updates, but maybe you should review and edit before posting.
Author's Response: thanks for reading. I'll defiantly look more at that stuff, i think i was really half away when i finsihed this chaper last night; so from now on i write leave it for an hour read it and edit/post. Lol Sound Good?
Author's Response: thanks for reading. I'll defiantly look more at that stuff, i think i was really half away when i finsihed this chaper last night; so from now on i write leave it for an hour read it and edit/post. Lol Sound Good?
tda720 (Signed) on Aug 09, 2007 10:19 pm (prelude.)
oh man, i hope the paps are going to be a big problem later on! i'm really liking it so far! update soon!
mozie (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2007 02:02 pm (prelude.)
LOVE IT!!!!! how could you leave us hanging like that. I want the sex scene
mozie (Anonymous) on Aug 02, 2007 09:06 pm (prelude.)
I like it so far, and sounds like it could get very interesting.
