Comments For Retail Hell Series
Lynn (Signed) on Oct 02, 2007 09:30 pm (The Body Shot (Part 2))
wow, this chapter is crazy but i saw it coming. maybe because i jst finished writing something similar



Gigi (Signed) on Oct 02, 2007 08:45 pm (The Body Shot (Part 2))
OK feel bad for Liz and everything, but WHY must you toture us like this!!!!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Oct 02, 2007 07:18 pm (The Body Shot (Part 2))
OMG. LoL. That was so awesome, too bad it didnt end up happening ... but dang that was hot. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen! Awesome job! -Traci



god gave me style (Signed) on Oct 02, 2007 07:05 pm (The Body Shot (Part 2))
oh my god! i hate you! I officially hate you now! how... how could you do that to me mere? i mean, i'm kinda worried for liz and all but she couldn't wait to die a little bit later in the evening?! damn!!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Oct 02, 2007 06:57 pm (The Body Shot (Part 2))

I think you must be the world's biggest tease....

yup.  must be! 

 




soxy58 (Signed) on Oct 02, 2007 06:12 pm (The Body Shot (Part 2))

OH MY GOSH MERE THIS ISNT FUNNY.

*dies x10000000* 




CutiePie07 (Signed) on Oct 02, 2007 05:39 pm (The Candyman)
Ahhh shit...I LOVE this story. I love the concept of it! I gotta read the rest but please update soon!



Vessy (Signed) on Oct 02, 2007 04:36 pm (The Body Shot (Part 2))
you did not just finish it like this! wow, you are AMAZING!



Hollie (Signed) on Oct 02, 2007 04:04 pm (The Body Shot (Part 2))
WHAT?! ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!



SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 02, 2007 04:01 pm (The Body Shot (Part 2))
Oh shit...that was amazing and yet scary at the same time. I mean I'm all for the two of them getting it on (and believe me girl, from the sound of the erection, it was about to go DOWN). But now I'm scared about their friend and I hope everything turns out ok. Great job love, can't wait for more!



Hollie (Signed) on Sep 07, 2007 01:41 pm (The Day from Hell, Part 2)
Bloody hell, are those two ever going to just get on with it? hell, I'M starting to feel almost as sex obsessed as they are just reading this *lol*



alimera (Signed) on Sep 07, 2007 11:48 am (The Day from Hell, Part 2)
woooooooooooooooooooooooooot!!!! they kissed!!!! i can't wait for their night out! update again soon, please!!!



god gave me style (Signed) on Sep 07, 2007 10:02 am (The Day from Hell, Part 2)
Yay! They finally kissed, but I want them to have sex already. You are the only tease that I see here! I can't wait for the next update!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 07, 2007 07:09 am (The Day from Hell, Part 2)

So...I think the true tease of this story is you, Mere.  because I was thinking that these would be the chapters where they would most definitely have sex, and they don't....c'mon girl!  don't leave me hanging!

But oohhh...they're so cute together :)  I love this story!




lice_scott (Signed) on Sep 07, 2007 06:40 am (The Day from Hell, Part 2)

ZOMG!

This was like puuurfect. They just need to hook up at the party....

But poor Justin... will have to wait  7 hours. the longest case of blue balls ever. hahaha                                     






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