JuJuB (Signed) on Aug 17, 2007 10:32 pm (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
And may I say that I am now dead from the awesome that is this chapter?  Kissage! and even better, apologetic yet turned the hell on!Justin. you my dear, are P.I.M.P.

Author's Response: Oh, wow, I'm pleased to hear that you liked the kissage so much.:-). So you think he's a p.i.m.p eh? Well, i don't know..maybe? hehehe. Thanks for the feed back.



classicbeauty (Signed) on Aug 17, 2007 03:01 am (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
girlie u know we got a deal! but give a child a heads up about the updates, u got me spoiled lol now i cant help but look a new chapter everyday... :op but i totally understand about school. anyways u know i loved it! but im like Jay why she crying all the time? if shes gonna cry can we do it in private? lol i know shes not weak but they dont... cant wait for more! Dani

Author's Response: I seem to be spoiling everyone with these constant updates. lol. Well, I'll try to keep them coming as often as possible, but yeah I have school so I might not be able to update constantly. And I guess you could say, Zara wears some of her emotions on her sleeve. Justin just seems to be getting her at her weak points i guess, but she's still a very strong person. :). The next update should be up tonight so stay posted. Thanks again for the great feedback. :-)



Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 10:04 pm (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
aw, nooooooooooooooooooooooooo =[

Author's Response: Noooo??? Why? :-S. j/k. I know that little scene was fustrating. It will get better i promise. :-). Stay tuned.



wildthang (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 07:04 pm (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
ZARAAAA NO!!! WHY? why did you react like that. no! now things are going to be messed up. I'm so dissapointed in you Z! I mean it's JUSTIN!!!! lol ok i'm done. Now i'm really wondering what's going to happen now with them. I want More!! And what is up with Justin saying Jeremy is not her type? how would he know her type. he doesn't even know her like that. great update chica.

Author's Response: oh wow, Z's getting pressure. But i mean i see where you're coming from. Thanks a lot for the feedback and stay tuned to see what happens with them.



rev0586 (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 06:51 pm (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
awww i didnt think she was gonna re act like that so im a little bit confused b/c of that is it mainly cuz shes a little tipsy i hope that doesnt ruin there chances of getting togeter BUT what u could do is that zara may start brushing him off and she and jeremy become boy/girl friend and jt could become jealous (r u kinda getting the hint that i want jt to become jealous) lol

Author's Response: You all just want poor justin to suffer from jealousy over Zara and Jeremy eh? lol. Poor guy. lol. Hasn't he suffered enough? :(. Heheh...More is coming soon, so you'll see what happens. Thanks a lot for the feedback.



Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 05:39 pm (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
eeeee! they kissed! That was such a cute little scene, but of course something has to go wrong! Why Zara, whyyy. They were so close and comfortable with each other in the pool and they both let their hair down and went at it and then...panic attack! Zaraaa whyyy. You had Justin Timberlake WET in a pool, and by that kiss, I'm sure he had her wet too...in more ways than one if you know what I mean *wink wink* So what's gonna happen in LA now? Is Justin gonna try to stay away from her? Will she come on to him next time? *hopes so* will there be a next time?? I'm so spazzing out right now! Update like, tonight or tomorrow pleasee, yes I'm way too involved. Oh yeah, and great chap! lmao

Author's Response:

Well yes, they kissed...and yes Zara panicked and I mean who in their right mind wouldn't want Justin in a pool with them soaking wet...kissing them? But, i guess Zara is a special 'case'. I think she turned him on more than he turned her on. I think she was too busy freaking out. Lmao. Wait to see what happens in LA and if anything more will happen between them. I'm working on the next update so it should be out soon. And I wouldn't say your involved...just enjoying what you read i guess? *innocent smile* :). Stay tuned for more and thanks so much for the fantastic feedback. I love to know what you guys think. :)

 




Gigi (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 03:28 pm (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
Wait a minute how does he know Jeremy is not her type? What's that about huh?

Author's Response: More importantly, why did he even suggest that jeremy wasn't Z's type? ;-). We'll see what happens. Thanks for the feedback.



SexualCoco (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 01:35 pm (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
Aww, but they were just about to get close and get along with each other! But I understand how that could have confused the both of them, plus they work together. Obviously they are picking up their attraction toward one another, so I can't wait to see what happens in LA. Thanks for the great update!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feeback and yeah, they are 'feeling' each other, but as to what's gonna happen in LA...read and see. :-). I already have the outline done. :). It shoud be....*cough* interesting. lol. Stay tuned.



tda720 (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 11:15 am (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
Great, now everything is going to be awkward when they leave!! Something's got to be done fast, don't you agree? Update soon girl, because I can't get enough (and because I'm leaving for a week and want to see what happens before tomorrow night!)

Author's Response: Lol...Yeah i agree something should be done. But i don't know how, what or when. lol. I'll try getting the next update in by the end of today before you leave i hope. Oh and yay for 'Second Best'! I'm loving the story girl...keep up the great work and thanks for the feeback and enjoy your outing.



LucidDreams (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 10:51 am (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
Oh no I should be happy but with Z's reaction I'm worried. What's going to happen between them now? Justin clearly likes her but she seems 'lost'. Update soon.

Author's Response: Wait and see what happens. :). Thanks for the feedback



alimera (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 10:28 am (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
oh dear. she liked it but she's confused. update again soon, i'm very intrigued by this story!!

Author's Response: Yeah she did like it didn't she? I'm glad you're interested with this story. It's far from over. :-). Thanks for the feedback and more is on the way. Stay tuned.



LoveYou2 (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 04:12 am (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
Hahahaha, I knew it wouldn't be long before he caved. You can't fight the feeling y'all. They can ignore each other but the tension is just gonna build up again. Muwhahahaha. And yea, I'm awake at 4am so excuse me if this sounds crazy lol More soon! Like..tonight lol

Author's Response: Lol yeah you're right...he just couldn't resist. I feel you on the building tension and no i don't think you sound crazy because you were up at 4 in the morning when you read this...:-S. I mean, when most people we asleep, because I posted it some time in the early morning too! :) Working on the next update so expect it soon. :-). Thanks for the great feedback





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