FHJL88 (Signed) on Nov 18, 2007 09:57 pm (Deniable Heartaches)
I love this story! I just read ten chapters straight through, but now I need to go to bed. Can't wait to read more tomorrow.

Author's Response: Oh I'm so honored you like it. That definately puts a smile on my face when people like what I've written. :). Thanks for the comment.



classicbeauty (Signed) on Aug 23, 2007 02:10 am (Deniable Heartaches)
*sniffuling* awe poor J he didnt deserve that! and ssh-e *eyes well* how...how could she be so cold?! *looks for a tissue* what they do? switch personality? oh this is just too much! *pause* but im lovin and needin more! so whatcha gonna do about it? lol - Dani p.s. awe thanks and i absolutely love ur work! stay tuned? u aint gotta worry im not going nowhere...u just keep em' comin'!

Author's Response: Hehehe, I know I'm responding after the update is already up, so check it out! And thanks for the compliment. I have no doubt you're going anywhere hehe.



SexualCoco (Signed) on Aug 23, 2007 01:56 am (Deniable Heartaches)
Aww, now I feel bad for Justin. I mean he basically just told her how he felt about her and she pushes him away. I hope they work something out though because that kissing scene was hot (haha!). Great update, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks a million. Just had to respond to the reviews. Anyway, I hope you like how things are playing out so far.



JuJuB (Signed) on Aug 23, 2007 01:05 am (Deniable Heartaches)
Couch kissage. very nice. and the 'I don't take rejection well' side of Justin makes me want to hug him and then laugh when he's out of earshot. *pets him* Lovely update. keep the goodness coming, yo. also...hehehe glad you liked the name HarpoLynn =)

Author's Response: Hehe glad you like it. thanks for the great feed back. :-)



LucidDreams (Signed) on Aug 22, 2007 06:46 pm (Deniable Heartaches)
Oh Zara. :(. You broke his heart! He felt it in his chest! he's in pain. how could you? I mean the kiss scene was wicked hot! gosh this is depressing, yet I can't get enough of it. I'm drawn to this drama tale. I think they might be falling in love and not know it. please fix this little predicament. I really want those two together. I know them having a relationship will be a journey, I'd love to read about. But Zara is as stubborn as a mule! I think she's insecure with Justin because of her size. She needs more self-esteem! She needs to come to her senses and realize how great Justin will be for her and fast! Update asap. I need my fix soon! I'm Justin and Zara deprived. lol. Great chapter by the way.

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review. I know I'm responding after the updates but I'm taking all reviews into consideration for the story. It's good to know what you guys think.



rev0586 (Signed) on Aug 22, 2007 05:55 pm (Deniable Heartaches)
looks like the tables have been turned im kinda getting the feeling that zara might be scared of having something w/ jt

Author's Response: Yes they did. Wait till you see what's in store for those two. hehe. :) Thanks for the feed back



tda720 (Signed) on Aug 22, 2007 01:53 pm (Deniable Heartaches)
Uhhh... no you didn't. Zara is stuuuuupidd; she wants Jeremy and not beautiful Justin, girl is crazy. I love the updates, like I told you before they're getting me by this week! But seriously, you've got to fix this, they were soooo close to the wild sex and then BAM.. she crushed his pretty little heart. LOL, update soon! I'm addicted.

Author's Response: I'm so glad my updates are helping your week to be a tad bit more enjoyable. :). Can't for your updates. lol. She did crush his heart, but Justin's a strong boy. He always bounces back. lol. Addiction is bad. :-). Hope you like the new updates and thanks.



Sweetchic05 (Signed) on Aug 22, 2007 10:42 am (Deniable Heartaches)
WOW!!! What happend to Z fantasizing about Justin in the beginning. I thought she wanted her some of that, now this Jeremy dude comes along man...... I hope she makes up her mind.

Author's Response: Yeah, that's only the beginning. And I'm not so sure if making up her mind is going to be an easy task. hehe. Thanks for the feedback.



alimera (Signed) on Aug 22, 2007 10:34 am (Deniable Heartaches)
OH. MY. GOD. is she the dumbest person to walk this earth?! JEEZ! update again soon!

Author's Response: Well, maybe. Haha. You be the judge. But things are about to change for the two of them. Thanks for the feed back.



wildthang (Signed) on Aug 22, 2007 09:31 am (Deniable Heartaches)
OMFG! I just read the last two updates. I really don't know what to say to this. I'm just as speechless as Justin. Just, OMG! Please update soon, like today. Please!!!! I'm suffering! I need more NOW! Awesome chap by the way. lol

Author's Response: I have as you can see. hehehe. Hope you enjoyed the new updates. :)



Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Aug 22, 2007 08:21 am (Deniable Heartaches)
See now, I'm gonna have to kill Zara. First time, okay, she was a little nervous. But this time, you had all that Timberlake on a couch...in the dark...up under you...on TOP of you... WILLINGLY wanting you and you give him up for Gymster Jeremy?! She obviously needs Justin to fuck her reeal good for her to get something in her head. And I hope soon that you grant both of them that wish! lol. But in all honesty, I kinda see where she's coming from, since they work together and all. But it's only so seldom you get Justin Timberlake! And he is the man she's been drooling over forever. But at the same time, I like that she's messing with Jeremy a lil bit so we can see how jealous he gets. Jealous=mindblowing sex right? Right lol. Yeah, I just don't know what I want. Another chapter is good though! good work on this one!

Author's Response: Ok, so I know I'm replying after the update is up. But, I know you very much want Zara and Justin to hook up. And well, maybe it might not be so easy. Maybe things might be a little complicated, so wait and see what happens. And Jeremy isn't leaving the picture just yet. :(. He makes things interesting...don't you agree? hehe, thanks a lot for the feed back



LoveYou2 (Signed) on Aug 22, 2007 03:05 am (Deniable Heartaches)
Oh boy, for once she's the one making things difficult. Is she having self esteem issues or what! Screw jeremy, obviously you don't like him that much if you're making out with some other dude twice lol It's not just tension! Well, ok it's that lol but it could be more if she would let if, she could at least try to get to know him better, maybe then she'll come around. I have a feeling she's stuborn though. Wow! Just was nice, this was a turning point for him I think, let's hope he doesn't do a 180 and turn stupid again but I have a feeling he will, that's what men do, screw up lol Oh, and the make out session was HOT, me likey the kissage lol More soon! :D Like..tonight lol I know how it is though, I just started school too, anyway, good chap!

Author's Response: Zara does have a low self-esteem and she's just confused by the attention she's getting from Justin. i guess she's still shocked that he's showing interest in her. They're both stubborn! :). And yeah, i like nice Justin more. hehe. Glad you liked the kissage by the way. :)





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