Vegas Chick (Signed) on Aug 29, 2007 03:02 pm (And So, It Begins)

OMG THEY ARE BOTH IN SO MUCH TROUBLE!!!! OH I DONT WISH TO BE THEM BECAUSE HELL IS GOING TO HIT THE FAN!!! AND ITS NOT GOING TO BE PRETTY!!! OH I HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE SOON I WANT TO KNOW WHAT YOU HAVE GOT FOR THEM TO TAKE NEXT. I DO HOPE THIS GETS JERMEY OUT OF THE PIC I JUST DONT LIKE HIM...LOL

 

Tina 



Author's Response: Yes they are! Even worse than when you 'crash your parents car' or get in trouble with the professor. hehehe. But I like the drama. It makes things interesting. But you'll have to wait and see exactly what transpires between these characters. Well, the next update is done and will be up shortly. And Jeremy isn't going anywhere just yet. hehe. I like having him around. Don't you? lol...anyway, thanks for the great feedback Tina. :-D



LucidDreams (Signed) on Aug 27, 2007 01:34 am (And So, It Begins)
OMG are you joking? Omg. I cannot believe those two! lol. It was about damn time they realized they want each other badly and can't resist. But I think there is going to be drama with Justin, Jeremy, Zara, Mallory, Jessica and those pics that were taken of J & Z in the parking lot. The kissing scene was intense but i agree that they were dumb to do it in public. I'm so into this story. I need more and soon! It's heating up! Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I have such loyal fans for this story. You all really make my writing worthwhile. :-D. Stay posted for the next update. It will be posted up shortly



Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 26, 2007 07:18 pm (And So, It Begins)
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg. lol

Author's Response: Lol. Couldn't have said it any better myself. Can't wait for you to read the next update. It's done! I'll post it up. Thanks for the reviews and I love your stories girl!



alimera (Signed) on Aug 26, 2007 08:25 am (And So, It Begins)
omg, she needs to get over it--she's supposed to be with justin anyway!! update again soon!

Author's Response: Haha I feel you on that. But I think Zara and Justin are a little more twisted than you all realize. hehe. Thanks for the feedback.



classicbeauty (Signed) on Aug 26, 2007 02:20 am (And So, It Begins)
ooo unexpected.. is it me or does it look like its getting juicy?! me like alot and cannot- *pauses* no no take that back- will not wait for more but i totally understand about school. ok so i was thinking...we could just meet at jamba juice before or after class, my treat and u bring the new chapters in return? ye..no? i thought i try... lol Dani p.s. look at u girl 12 chapters and over a hundred review u and Tay need to rub off on me so when i post my stuff one day i get amazing feedback like yall...

Author's Response: It is getting juicy! It's not just you...it is! hehe. Yeah, I know, I just did a killer programming exam, so I need my fiction fix to mellow me out. lol. Girl I'll bring the chaps and you bring the cash and we're good! hehe j/k. Aww thanks so much for the wonderful compliment. I hope you post your stuff up, I'd love to read it. I need to catch up on my reading. I'm behind since i have school. I only ever get to write my updates and post them up and maybe catch up on one or two chaps of some stories. But thanks for the amazing feedback as usual. The next update is done. I'll post it up soon.



rev0586 (Signed) on Aug 25, 2007 11:18 pm (And So, It Begins)
all i can say is that they are asking for trouble

Author's Response: Yea I totally and 100% agree with you. But, it makes things interesting...don't you agree? :-). Thanks for the feedback.



tda720 (Signed) on Aug 25, 2007 11:14 pm (And So, It Begins)
Greatest thing to come home to! These past two chapters were great, they need to forget about Jessica and Jeremy and get it on!!

Author's Response: Girl I am so glad you're back! And I sent a reply to your email so check it out! I love your stories. And I so want a sequel to 'it's too late' hehe. But i'm just randomly throwing that request out there. Feel free to catch it. lol. Anyway, Jeremy isn't going anywhere. I mean if i was to kill him off in an accident, or let's say, Justin and Zara plot to push he and Mallory out the window on like...oh i dunno...the fifteenth floor of a building, then were will all the drama be? hehe. Anyway, things are just getting interesting. Hope you stick around for more. Thanks for the feedback Tay!



Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Aug 25, 2007 08:55 pm (And So, It Begins)
Oh goodness, oh goodness. MORE making out! SCORE. I loved the kissing scene and I love how open and fun Zara is to Justin now. I can't believe she boldly kissed him in the parking lot and said that she didn't regret it? Who is this person! Her and J are just so...*sigh* What a cute couple. See, this is why I love reading fanfics, it takes your mind off his real life and he can just kick back and be attracted to a normal everyday girl, instead of a celebrity. It makes you feel a little more connected to him you know? And yeah, I thought kissing in the parking lot was stupid too. Hot nonetheless, but stupid. Gah, they couldn't wait til they got home?? And I do too feel sorry for Jeremy...I mean not really cause I want her with Justin, but you know lmao. I honestly think that subconsciously Jeremy is her escape from Justin. He likes her, she likes him. She doesn't work for him, and you know, he's hot. But her real heart belongs to Justin, if not, then why would she keep kissing him? But anyway, enough with this long ass review lmao. You're a great writer with a great story and everyday I wake up, I look forward to reading a new chapter. I wish you luck with school and even with school, thanks so much for making us happy with your frequent updates!

Author's Response: Yes more making out! woop woop! hehe. Yeah, they are really open with each other now. Doesn't that make you wonder what's that about? hehe. I'm just messing. I guess they are finally seeing each other in a new light. Yeah they are very cute. I agree with the statement about fanfics. I love that we can create alternate realities where Justin can be anyone we want him to be. It's bittersweet. It does make you feel an odd connection. It also makes you wonder what he's like. Not the celebrity side that we see, but just him in his common element.  Like i said once, jeremy isn't that easy to get rid of. hehe. You'll have to rough it out a little. Hope you'll stick with them to the end. I'm so glad you love this story. And thank you so much for the awesome reviews. The next update is done so stay posted. :-D. Thanks for the well wishes with school too! You all are so great.



Gigi (Signed) on Aug 25, 2007 08:46 pm (And So, It Begins)

She just can't stopping kissing him, can she!?! Why do I have a feeling Mallory might be behind the photo. I mean after all Justin does want to throw her out of a window and after this he just might. That is if she is behind it after all.LOL.



Author's Response: No she can't. He can't either. It's becoming a dangerous 'habit' lol. I don't know too much about the photo thing just yet. lol. wait and see. Hehe...thanks for the update. :-D



Koralin_Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 25, 2007 07:58 pm (And So, It Begins)
Oh snap, I think them two are going to face some serious drama real soon. Besides that, steamy ass update. :) Jay and Zara sitting in a tree. K.I.S.S.I.N.G....... Couldn't help it. Oh, and here's that link to Coffee's site for ya. http://www.coffee.tasting-eden.com/homev21.html

Author's Response: Yeah I agree about the drama part. lol. Thanks. :-). Oh! And thank you for the link. She's the bomb yo! lol. hehe. Thanks for the feedback. More is coming soon.



wildthang (Signed) on Aug 25, 2007 05:06 pm (And So, It Begins)
That was smoking man. So happy things are heating up between them. * But yeah, I agree they are stupid.* lol. I bet a ton of drama is just waiting to take place over the horizon. lol Update again soon. I like the speedy updates. And good luck with school. I know it sucks ass sometimes.

Author's Response: Man,  Lol. No matter though. Thanks for the feedback. I smell the drama too. hehe. Thanks for the well wishes. School is a pain.



morgan101 (Signed) on Aug 25, 2007 04:19 pm (And So, It Begins)
I read the entire thing last night. Such an amazing story. I love your style of writing and how the characters come to life through their point of views. And I love their personalities. You're a talented writer dear. Keep the fantabulous work coming. This is a fav of mine for sure. I wonder what's going to happen with Justin and Zara now that they can't seem to deny each other. I feel bad for Jeremy, but I agree with Zara. If I had a chance to kiss JT, my boyfriend would be the last thing on my mind. lol

Author's Response: Oh wow, I'm honored. Welcome to the drama that is Justin and Zara! hehe. I hope you follow me to the end and enjoy your read. Thanks for the compliment as well. Much appreciated. :-)



Vessy (Signed) on Aug 25, 2007 03:52 pm (And So, It Begins)
awesome

Author's Response: Thanks Vessy! :-)





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