Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 31, 2007 11:22 pm (The First Escapade)
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so close, so close, so close!!!!!!!!!!!! why won't she leave jeremy? he's not as fine as Justin!!!!!!!!!!!! lol



classicbeauty (Signed) on Aug 31, 2007 12:47 am (The First Escapade)
AAAAHH! *does a happy dance* OMG I feel like I just won the lotto!?! Girl i almost screamed when i saw this but i caught myself before waking everyone in the house. lol Oh my this chapter was so worth the wait! Still dont like 'gym boy' and he proved i was right by acting a fool! Now lets not forget Ju and Berry...boy oh boy did it get hott and juicy at the end- I didnt know what to do nor what to say?! D, girl u know what I need- Dani



JuJuB (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 10:51 pm (The First Escapade)

Ahaha first off, you are the awesome with your perception of Justin. I see him as being kinda crude and all 'guy' like with the 'i wish she'd get on her knees and fix it!' statement. and Zara, im glad she tossed his line right back at him. ahahaha I'm loving this and so is Harpolynn....I think you've inspired me to stop being all shy and make with the posting of my own fic. I do love some Justin torture and you're chalk full of it. *hands you muffins* bravo!

More! pretty please.




tda720 (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 10:10 pm (The First Escapade)
DONNA!!! WTH?!?! They were just about to do the dirty and you had to go and make Trace interrupt them, I love that man but not now. You did this on purpose didn't you? I loved the update, despite their lack of an 'escapade'. Update when you get the chance girl, hope everything with school is going well!



wildthang (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 10:03 pm (The First Escapade)

that was blazing hot! but I agree. you are such a tease girl. now I'm desperate to see Z and Justin 'go all the way'. I bet it iz going to be burning like the sun lol. 




rev0586 (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 09:32 pm (The First Escapade)
that was fucking hot



Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 08:19 pm (The First Escapade)
geez! you're more of a tease than Justin! That was really hotttt. I think it's so romantic how they can't get enough of each other. And yet at the same time, trifliing lmao. Well Justin has always been trifling, but what Zara is doing to Jeremy just ain't right. He seems like a really nice guy and crazy about her and from what I know for now, he doesn't deserve that. I mean I don't like him with Zara, but the man is a human being. If she wants Justin, why can't she just break up with him? I'd rather her be with Justin when she's available! Great update and get that lesson! But don't wait too long to give us another one! peash!



alimera (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 02:00 pm (The First Escapade)
hahahahaha, that was great. now they seriously need to get it on!! update again soon!



Koralin_Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 11:23 am (The First Escapade)
Wonderfulness!!!



what_where (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 02:26 am (The First Escapade)
Another amazingly hot chapter!! Z and J are so cute together! please update soon.





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