Timberlake (Signed) on Sep 20, 2007 07:58 pm (One Step Closer - Part 2)
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! omg! why can't they just be together???? i'm so missing somebody right now and this is making it worse! haha. but i can't stop reading! it's an addiction!!!! haha

Author's Response: I know they should be together. I agree. Hehe. So glad this story is addicting. It gets better. :D. Thanks for the feedback.



lostinadreamx (Signed) on Sep 20, 2007 03:27 pm (One Step Closer - Part 2)

Damn... I really love Zara and Justin together. Really cute couple and not over the top.

 Also congrats on getting over 200 reviews. You deserve it girl!!



Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad you like them. I wanted them to be as real in terms of how they interract with each other, considering their situations. Thanks a lot for the congrats. I was shocked myself. I was like Wow this is...really amazing. I'm touched so many people like this story. I can't say that enough. :). Thanks for the feedback. The next update is done.



wildthang (Signed) on Sep 20, 2007 12:23 pm (One Step Closer - Part 2)

One word: Amazing!

I need more now! lol 



Author's Response: Aww thanks a million. :). The next update is done



classicbeauty (Signed) on Sep 20, 2007 01:35 am (One Step Closer - Part 2)
Hold up wait...the Titanic? why not Dirty Dancing? but a sinkin ship at a moment like this... that dont make u nervous? before i go, I was lookin at the top ten and let me just say Berry's not the only one whos got the touch-u see this story u were absolutely unsure about, almost deleted it... im glad u didn't otherwise i would have missed out on the 6th most read story...thats not all-looks whos at the top, cream of the crop, ten of most reviewed? thats right u,Ms D, im so inspired u & happy for u - Dani

Author's Response: I know right? I guess the titanic thing was just cliched. hehe. Oh Zara loves Dirty Dancing too and I like that movie. It's one of my old favs. Oh yeah, I was stunned too with the amount of responses this story got. I really thought people wouldn't like it. :-). I'm so glad I can entertain you all with my twisted mind. It's been in my system for some time and I finally took some time to ouline the ideas so I could write this. I'm glad I Inspired you. I get inspired by all the authors and readers here all the time. You need to post your stuff girl. I'll read. Thanks for the compliment and sticking with me through this story so far. The next update will be up soon. ;)



classicbeauty (Signed) on Sep 20, 2007 12:40 am (One Step Closer - Part 2)
*here is a replay of dani reading part two* omg robin thicke?! he is too fine...isnt he mar-yep he is, but Berry looking never hurt anyone.. what the-Ju?! i swear men and their egos?! the nerve of him to be a baby a totally as-*stops, silence fills the air* OMG!?! A YACHT?! oh my, this has just turn into a love/hate relationship-love to love the story & its characters but hate its not real & not me, girl where can we find a man like him? lol a boa-no wait my bad-a yacht...u did it, dont know how but u did

Author's Response: LMAO!!! Haha. I cracked up by that review. Omg. lol. That was a good reenactment. hehe. I love your reviews. They're so  creative.  :).  I'm glad you love to hate it.  :). It gets better. I got the next few chaps outlined. :D.  And what exactly did I do? lol hehe. Thanks a lot for the review dani.



lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 06:11 pm (One Step Closer - Part 2)
awe!  can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. More is on the way. :D



tda720 (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 02:44 pm (One Step Closer - Part 2)
AHHHHHHHHHHH! Is really all I want to say right now. It's about time that they're getting somewhere, shhiiiit can I get a yacht from JT?! I can't wait for them to set off to wherever they decide to go, do I sense that there will be some love making on the horizon?? This def made sneaking on my sisters laptop worth it and it made me feel a little better about not being able to write for a ccouple days. Update soon! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen!

Author's Response: Haha I feel you Tay. It's about time right? Yeah, at least now, things can start moving forward for them. I'm predicting it will too. :-). Even though they got a few bumps ahead, I won't dissapoint. And I miss you already. I read the notice you posted on SB. Can't wait for everything to work out.  Oh and I read your email so I'll be responding to it soon with some ideas. But it looks like you've got a good grasp on where you want things to go. But I'll take some time off to work out some of my ideas and email them to you. Anyway, can't wait till you're back. Oh and thanks for the great feedback. :)



LucidDreams (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 01:52 pm (One Step Closer - Part 2)
OMG, I've been absent for a while and reading all the past updates were amazing. Is JT in love with Zara? That's the only explanation I see here. I mean he bought her a boat! That's pretty huge. Update soon.

Author's Response: Oh thank you for the compliment. I'm trying to get this story out of my system. I want to see it right through to the end, so I can work on updating my other stories. :). This one just won't stop flowing though, so that's a good thing. :). You all inspire me too. Stick around for the next update. You'll get the answers you're looking for and some more. Thanks for the feedback.



alimera (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 12:50 pm (One Step Closer - Part 2)
good, they need some alone time!! i wish i would get a yacht as an apology...lol! update again soon!

Author's Response: They most definitely need alone time. It's coming soon too. Who wouldn't want someone to buy them such a cool gift right? Thanks a lot for the feedback. More is on the way.



Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 12:58 am (One Step Closer - Part 2)
Did I skip a chapter where they had sex? WTF, he got her a boat?? a BOAT? A boat is like a gift you give to a person that has fucked your brains out AND you married! He's seriously sprung on something. But, I think it's amazing that he loves her for just being who she is. It was so sweet for him to think of her like that. I hope that this vacay goes off as planned for them *crosses fingers* Can't wait to find out! Time for another chapter pleeease *big smile* wonderful 2 part update, I feel so spoiled!

Author's Response: No you didn't skip a chapter. lol. So we already know, it would be cruel and unusual for something intimate to not take place between them after all that's happened and the level of their attraction to the one another. I guess right now, it just comes down to when huh? I'm still trying to figure out the perfect time frame for this. Bare with me. All other times were just... Well, I sort of have this direction I want the story to go in so, everything has to mesh together. So glad you're still enjoying it. I know I maybe confused people with Justin's change and why he does the things he does or says the things he says. It will make sense soon. Hopefully, the next update will shed light on a lot of things between those two. Thanks for the feedback girl. They're very motivating.



Gigi (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 10:39 pm (One Step Closer - Part 2)
SERIOUSLY ARE YOU KIDDING ME! HE BOUGHT HER A YACHT! Made I don't know what to think about this chapter. First he gets all mad then...UGH!

Author's Response: I'm sure if you think that's a good or bad thing. Well I think it could be a bit of both. Justin has issues and so does Zara. They make for an interesting pair I guess. :) Thanks for the feedback



rev0586 (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 10:32 pm (One Step Closer - Part 2)
awwww thats so sweet i wish jt gave me a yacht better not really though lol

Author's Response: LOL yeah him and that gift...oh boy. We'll see how it turns out. Thanks for the feedback.





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