I hate Mallory, that can't be said enough. I am so happy that they did it. Great Chapter.

Author's Response: :-D. No one likes Mallory. She's not that bad is she? Anyhoo, yeah, everyone was waiting for the day *Ju and berry* did it. lol. Thanks for the review. More is comming real soon.

I really don't like Mallory and Jeremy.

can we say da-da-da da-da-da damn girl that was h o t t hot loved it and what the f*ck?! whats wrong with her?

girl, whoever those sensitive readers are, they can just skip the chapters. get as detailed as possilble. LMAO. that was HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTT! OMG, he said it and what did she do? jump on his drick and step on his heart. poor jay. i get the feeling that it's not gonna be so great in the morning. this rollercoaster story is driving me crazy, but i looooove every minute of it =]]]] keep up the fantastic work.

Author's Response: Hahaha. Ok, I'll stay detailed. :). And thanks so much for the feedback. They are certainly on an emotional rollercoaster. It won't last forever though. I'm working on it. hehe.

HOTNESSS!!!!! *Ohh fans self* lol. So hot! So steamy! More! Please more! I'm not sensitive to the visuals. I want you to do another one of this story. Anyway, why do I feel like Mallory and Jeremy are going to mean trouble and why do I feel like Zara is going to shatter Justin's heart? Oh, it's all wonderful. I'm officially in love with this story. We're involved now. lmao. More soon!

Author's Response: LOL So glad yo loved it. Stay tuned for more. :) So glad you're involved, but don't get too involved now. lol.

oooh pool sex. HOT. So glad they finally did it! But ugh, I'm mad that she didn't say I love you back. I've noticed through this story how Zara is the one who's scared that Justin's gonna break her heart and she's all sensitive and everything...somehow I think that roles are changing. I have no doubt in my mind that Zara is in love with Justin, but I think that he's more in love with her and he'll probably end up being the one getting his heart broken. I got a feeling that Justin is gonna be the one she runs to when things don't work out with her and Jeremy, and I certainly hope that it's not strictly for sex cause man, Justin is gonna be so heartbroken. Realllly great chapter and I can't wait for more. You're awesome!

Author's Response: Hmm you know you have a good point with them switching roles. Wait to see how things turn out. I have it planned out. hehe. Thanks so much for all your awesome reviews. They are really motiviating. :)

OO....dayum girl!  good vissy!  can't wait to see what drama Mallory brings! 

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. Yeah, Mallory is a volcano waiting to erupt that's for sure. hehe. More is on the way.

I love it! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! More is coming soon.

Damn...that was hot! Like I said before, it's about time they got down to business and that right there was delicious. I'm kind of sad that she didn't say she loved him back after he said it to her (I hope that will change though). Great job and thanks for the update, can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: Oh Now I'm happy you liked it. More is coming soon. I've just been so busy with school, I don't get time to sit and really indugle in my writing to update all my stories and reading the other stories on the archive like I want. Anyway, the next update is done so stay tuned. Thanks for the feedback

oh. my. god. lovely visuals!! and damn zara for not saying the three words back to justin...not nice! update again soon please...

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment. I'm really relieved you guys liked it. Yeah, Zara is on something else right now...let's hope it gets cleared up and soon. :) Thanks for the feedback.

Yess!!! They finally really did the dirty, and it was effing hot! And Justin loves her?! This is so great, all in one chapter, but I have a really bad feeling that this isn't going to turn out for the best (at least when it comes to Gym Boy and Mallory). Good luck on your midterms this week girl, and hurry back so we can figure out what happens next!! Thanks for the update, again it was great as usual.

Author's Response: They finally did it eh? Hehe. I know you've been waiting forever. And yes, he does Love her, but did you ever doubt that? all the signs were there...hehe. And you're right. There are going to be some serious obstacles coming around the corner that Justin and Zara need to overcome before they can really truly be together. Hope you stick around for more. :). Thanks for the goodluck. I needed it. And so sad that SB ended. I read the last two updates today. Hurry with another great story for us ok? Hehe. Thanks for the review Tay.

Finally, they did it!  It would have been a perfect night for them if she would have said I love you too, but anywho.  Loved it!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yes. Finally! hehe. Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it. More it coming soon.