Comments For An Unexpected Love Affair
classicbeauty (Signed) on Oct 10, 2007 03:39 pm (Be Without You)
Author's Response: Girl I finally got a chance to check out the song and you know you're right? It does make me think of berry and Ju. hehe. I guess it's the words and everything. Plus you got to love Omarion. hehe. ;)
heard this song and it made me think of berry and ju lol tell me what you think, on my way to work be back to read & review more later
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/omarion/justcantletyougo.html
dani
Author's Response: Girl I finally got a chance to check out the song and you know you're right? It does make me think of berry and Ju. hehe. I guess it's the words and everything. Plus you got to love Omarion. hehe. ;)
classicbeauty (Signed) on Oct 10, 2007 03:18 am (Be Without You)
no no no what is she doing?! what is wrong with her? and ju poor ju that had to hurt however look at it this way...all that anger, aggression and pain will give him enough and power for when he wells on gym boy lmao
Tash2 (Signed) on Oct 07, 2007 07:33 am (Be Without You)
IS SHE COMPLETELY FUCKED IN THE HEAD! I'm cool i'll be calm till u fix stuff but HURRY i don't like this at all got my boo cryin and shit don't make me do a drive by.
Author's Response: Yes she is. With good reason too, that you'll soon find out in the next few updates. I'm workin on fixing everything. hehe. LMAO at the drive by. That cracked me up. If she died, we'd have no story. :(. thanks a lot for the feedback. :-D
Author's Response: Yes she is. With good reason too, that you'll soon find out in the next few updates. I'm workin on fixing everything. hehe. LMAO at the drive by. That cracked me up. If she died, we'd have no story. :(. thanks a lot for the feedback. :-D
Gigi (Signed) on Oct 06, 2007 09:16 pm (Be Without You)
OK first of all, how dare you end the chapter right there!!! Second of all what is wrong with Zara!? Why is she so f'd up in the head! I don't know about Justin but I am so sick of her games!!!! Just update date soon I think I'm having an anxiety attack over! Either that or heart attack!
Author's Response: I know, I know, but I ended it there for a reason. hehe. I won't keep you all in the dark too long. The next few chaps will clear up everything. Zara...she is a mystery that's soon to be solved also. LOL. The next update is already done, so it will be up soon. Thanks a million for the feedback.
Author's Response: I know, I know, but I ended it there for a reason. hehe. I won't keep you all in the dark too long. The next few chaps will clear up everything. Zara...she is a mystery that's soon to be solved also. LOL. The next update is already done, so it will be up soon. Thanks a million for the feedback.
tda720 (Signed) on Oct 06, 2007 01:50 pm (Be Without You)
Hate you? Never, but stopping right there was pretty messed up. Zara is effing crazy, what is her problem, hurting Justin like that. And what could Justin and gym boy possibly have to talk about other than the fact that Justin needs to beat his ass and get it over with?? Good luck on that midterm, and update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah I know. I agree Justin needs to beat Jeremy up for what he's done. More is coming soon. everyhting should be cleared up through the next few chaps i'm working on. Thanks for the review girl.
Author's Response: Yeah I know. I agree Justin needs to beat Jeremy up for what he's done. More is coming soon. everyhting should be cleared up through the next few chaps i'm working on. Thanks for the review girl.
Timberlake (Signed) on Oct 06, 2007 01:44 pm (Be Without You)
Author's Response: lol. Oh I'm sorry. It's not going to stay like that forever. I'm working on fixing everything, and helping you all understand the reason for my characters behaviors. especially Zara's. Soon...very soon. Stay posted. :). Thanks for the feedback.
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do you like having me scream at my computer screen??????? UGH. i have to go to work!!!! haha. NOW THIS. thanks. thanks alot. lol
Author's Response: lol. Oh I'm sorry. It's not going to stay like that forever. I'm working on fixing everything, and helping you all understand the reason for my characters behaviors. especially Zara's. Soon...very soon. Stay posted. :). Thanks for the feedback.
wildthang (Signed) on Oct 06, 2007 11:27 am (Be Without You)
WHOT!!! Ok, I'm pissed with Zara now. Please fix this. And why is Justin at Jeremy's? What's that about? Oh. so much drama. I love it. Update asap
Author's Response: Everyone is pissed at Zara now. Even I am, when I read over what i've written, but it's necessary. She's this way for a reason and soon, you all will understand just why she's the way she is. More is coming soon. Thanks
Author's Response: Everyone is pissed at Zara now. Even I am, when I read over what i've written, but it's necessary. She's this way for a reason and soon, you all will understand just why she's the way she is. More is coming soon. Thanks
alimera (Signed) on Oct 06, 2007 09:36 am (Be Without You)
okay i'm completely confused...why is justin at jeremy's? i hope trace slaps some sense into zara. and i hope you update again soon!
Author's Response: Sorry for the confusion...i promise it will be cleared up soon. :). Thanks for the feedback
Author's Response: Sorry for the confusion...i promise it will be cleared up soon. :). Thanks for the feedback
lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Oct 06, 2007 12:56 am (Be Without You)
OMG....more soon!!!!
Author's Response: More is on the way. Thanks. :)
Author's Response: More is on the way. Thanks. :)
Sweetchic05 (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 11:54 pm (Be Without You)
WHAT!!! Girl you can't leave me hangin like that update soon plzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, the next update is done. It will be up shortly. :) Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: I'm sorry, the next update is done. It will be up shortly. :) Thanks for the feedback.
LucidDreams (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 11:39 pm (Be Without You)
O_o! Wow. I almost cried with Justin. I could feel his raw emotions and pain. Why is Zara so stupid? What are those pills she keep taking? And hot damn! A Justin and Jeremy face off? I hope we find out how this turns out soon.
Author's Response: All your questions will be answered...hehe. Stay posted for more and thanks for the feedback
Author's Response: All your questions will be answered...hehe. Stay posted for more and thanks for the feedback
SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 11:34 pm (Be Without You)
Damn...that was hella intense! First off, is she crazy for saying those things to Justin? I mean the man cried for God sakes over her, she really needs to get her shit together after that. And what's gonna go down between Justin and Jeremy? I'm hella intrigued about how this is going to turn out. Great update, thanks!
Author's Response: I think both Justin and Zara are a bit crazy and unstable. Yeah, well, from this next update things are going to switch up a bit for the the both of them. The Justin and Jeremy interraction will be explained soon too. I promise. Thanks for the feedback. :)
Author's Response: I think both Justin and Zara are a bit crazy and unstable. Yeah, well, from this next update things are going to switch up a bit for the the both of them. The Justin and Jeremy interraction will be explained soon too. I promise. Thanks for the feedback. :)
Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 11:10 pm (Be Without You)
oh wow that was ugly. i felt so bad for justin, although i know she didn't mean it. But just the thought of him crying and the pain that he felt at the moment, heartbreaking! And this chat, hmmmm...wonder what they're gonna discuss. Great update! it's time for more more more!!
Author's Response: Yeah it was pretty bad...More is on the way. Oh and you'll find out about Jeremy and Justin's 'Chat' soon. :). Thanks for the feedback
Author's Response: Yeah it was pretty bad...More is on the way. Oh and you'll find out about Jeremy and Justin's 'Chat' soon. :). Thanks for the feedback
rev0586 (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 10:55 pm (Be Without You)
damn chat what chat
Author's Response: You'll see soon. :). Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: You'll see soon. :). Thanks for the feedback.
