classicbeauty (Signed) on Oct 14, 2007 12:44 am (How Do I Breathe)
wow he really cares berry better wake up and smell the coffee-mmm...hot chocolate saids great right now, maybe tomorrow morning. anywho u should so check out omarion's other song obsession so works for this too! totally love it but i love the story more - dani



Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Oct 09, 2007 03:44 am (How Do I Breathe)
Oh wow, I know exactly the way he feels. But damn, he must've really had his heartbroken if he had to go away for a month. I'm glad to know that she still loves him and that she misses him terribly, as does him. I can't wait til they reconcile, people in love with each other belong together! And people who have been apart for awhile has GREAT makeup sex, and don't make it sensitive, I love raw sexual detailed sex! Just letting you know *wink wink* Great chapter and I surely can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Justin is, well, he's Justin. In this story, he has a lot of depth and complexity to him with raw emotions he barely ever hides. I try to still make him as simple as possible in all of it. :) I know they belong together so, i'll see what i can do about making that work. lol. :P. And I totally feel you on the detailed sex scenes. I like mine detailed too, but not excessively raunchy. Thanks for the feedback and more is on the way. :)



wildthang (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 05:57 pm (How Do I Breathe)
Poor, poor Ju. This is heart wrenching. Love hurts. That's for sure. I can't wait for those two to reconcile. They need each other. Zara should realize she needs Justin. They should be together. Update soon

Author's Response: I know, it's so agonizing, but with bad comes good and vice versa.  I feel you on them needing each other. We'll see what happens. Thanks for the review. :)



Timberlake (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 05:02 pm (How Do I Breathe)
aw, damn. i know the feeling. love hurts like a motherfucker. i wish i had a nice little long cabin to run to. ugh, i hope he feels better! =/

Author's Response: Yes It does hurt! I can testify! lol. I wish I had me one of those too! Well, time heals all wounds. So, with time comes great strides and changes. :) Thanks for the review. :)



Koralin_Timberlake (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 11:23 am (How Do I Breathe)
( Heart fails to beat ) See? Look at what you do to me. Oh lordy, update SOON!!!! Please :)

Author's Response: Where have you been girl? Still waiting patiently for the 'This is my Story' Updates. :P. And why isn't your heart beating? Don't worry, everything will be alright....I guesss...I think....I hope ^_^. Next update is on the way. Thanks for the feeeback. :)



alimera (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 08:48 am (How Do I Breathe)
good another update is coming soon...because i'm still a little confused!!

Author's Response: Ok, this next one should shed some light on things. Thanks for the feeback. ;)



lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 01:02 am (How Do I Breathe)
ooh can't wait for more!

Author's Response: More on the way. Thanks. :)



tda720 (Signed) on Oct 07, 2007 10:56 pm (How Do I Breathe)
Grrrr, you're leaving off at bad spots D. You better update soon cuz I need to know what's going to happen with them. I'm glad Zara is feeling the brunt of everything, girl shouldn't have been so stupid to tell him she doesn't love him!

Author's Response: I'm updating now! Yay! You're going to find out. Don't worry. Everything is coming into place. :) Thanks for the feedback Tay. What's happening with Feldata? Hmm...So glad you finished second best. I've been so busy. Don't feel like I've forgotten. :(. Let me know ok?



Gigi (Signed) on Oct 07, 2007 09:23 pm (How Do I Breathe)
Turned poor Justin into a mountain man.

Author's Response: Aww man I know, but at least he's a hot mountain man. haha. Thanks for the review. :)





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